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mirror, mirror

Snow White

Oh darling
daydreams and night  
you have become an angel 
floating into dreams 
so beautiful they sing

Pure petal wings flutter
dressed in the color of snow 
They dance inside warm love melts
shining a faraway star 
winking in the night sky 

Whom embraces the outer body sweetly
I open four chambers to you
holding all keys out 
My queen warmly holds the soul

One kiss from you 
smitten I would say smiling 
I will always smile in loves grace 
Wishing that I was holding you right now

Wow what a dream baby
out off this world 
you're so beautiful in these eyes 
dazzling mirror reflections blinding
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 12/17/2014 6:01:00 AM
Great one, beautiful play of words Liam!! Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 12/14/2014 5:11:00 PM
Lovely and romantic, Liam. You offer the keys to your heart as petal wings flutter...touching words, indeed! #7 // paul
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Date: 12/12/2014 7:08:00 PM
I love to see that smile! Beautiful your poetry and wonderful your heart.
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Date: 12/12/2014 6:51:00 PM
This is a very beautiful romantic poem that you have penned here dear Liam. This one is truly a Gem. A solid 7 +++ for you! You truly have the gift of writing these romantic deeply heart touching poems my very dear friend. May God's love enfold you always in the comfort of His presence and watch over you always and protect you. Love and Hugs! :)Dorian xxxx
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Date: 12/12/2014 6:28:00 PM
Wow, if I was a woman, well, you get the idea, this was very beautiful and romantic! Cheers
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