Snow White

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Oh darling daydreams and night you have become an angel floating into dreams so beautiful they sing Pure petal wings flutter dressed in the color of snow They dance inside warm love melts shining a faraway star winking in the night sky Whom embraces the outer body sweetly I open four chambers to you holding all keys out My queen warmly holds the soul One kiss from you smitten I would say smiling I will always smile in loves grace Wishing that I was holding you right now Wow what a dream baby out off this world you're so beautiful in these eyes dazzling mirror reflections blinding

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Sudha Chandra

Date: 12/17/2014 6:01:00 AM

Great one, beautiful play of words Liam!! Enjoyed reading.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/14/2014 5:11:00 PM

Lovely and romantic, Liam. You offer the keys to your heart as petal wings flutter...touching words, indeed! #7 // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/12/2014 7:08:00 PM

I love to see that smile! Beautiful your poetry and wonderful your heart.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/12/2014 6:51:00 PM

This is a very beautiful romantic poem that you have penned here dear Liam. This one is truly a Gem. A solid 7 +++ for you! You truly have the gift of writing these romantic deeply heart touching poems my very dear friend. May God's love enfold you always in the comfort of His presence and watch over you always and protect you. Love and Hugs! :)Dorian xxxx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/12/2014 6:28:00 PM

Wow, if I was a woman, well, you get the idea, this was very beautiful and romantic! Cheers