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Snow White

First Snow Daylight~ My world is covered with pure white snow Untarnished The branches of the red pine out my Window, softly comforted with a thin blanket Of downy fluff streets, unmarked by soot, Await transgressions of human movement. One contemplates at such times~ Hats, snow boots, scarves, packers and Don't forget to throw the heavy survival blanket I bought from Joyners in Grand Marais Mn... (On one of my annual camping trips to the far North with my daughters as they were Growing up, showing them where to find Peace in the real world God Created) ...Into the backseat of my car for those Unexpected moments when caught outside Demands prolonged warmth to avoid frostbite. Naturally, one takes personal inventory At such times, compensations really, Mostly age related, necessities for making It over the winter hump to hoped for, Spring. There are tools I engage > seed catalogs begin Arriving, thoughts of renewal, both of nature And myself emerge in my thinking. Am I worthy of such a renaissance? are there Apologies or pleas of forgiveness needed? Satisfied with conclusions, I convince myself To venture forth in this clean slate ouside, Properly self-chastened to avoid past potholes, And enjoin my gentle imprints with other Intrepid wanderers of the north country. ~ early November in Minnesota '18

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Date: 10/14/2019 6:20:00 PM
John, I love everything about freshly fallen snow and I love the introspective beauty of your superb poem. I was drawn into your snow white world by the captivating power of your imagery, emotions and poetic artistry. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/14/2019 7:55:00 PM
Thanks Susan!
Date: 12/23/2018 6:09:00 AM
Hi James, love the creativity in your writes. I do love the snow. I just love the feeling of peace that it gives me. It is cold enough for snow here in Scotland my friend. Your poetic gem touches me. I do love your thoughts. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 11/28/2018 2:28:00 AM
Last week we had out first snow, so lovely like this poem. however this week, we have more snow, and more snow and more snow!!!!!!! LOL
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Date: 11/26/2018 10:50:00 PM
The snow is pure and your thoughts take me there in the moment. To embrace beauty all around, nature- the wonder of it all. Before everything becomes, tarnished again. This is beautiful in so many ways. ~ Brandy
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/27/2018 12:45:00 AM
Thank you Brandy!
Date: 11/23/2018 1:13:00 PM
Hi James, Always prepared for any situation when you travel, you sound like my husband! Enjoyed your vivid imagination about winter and your impending joy of a spring shorty to arrive! A wonderful write James, well done! Best wishes, Jennifer
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/23/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer!
Date: 11/21/2018 3:32:00 PM
Love this, James, you take one on a journey, with your wonderful words..
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/21/2018 4:05:00 PM
Nice to seeya, Harry! Happy Thanksgiving, my friend!
Date: 11/12/2018 4:15:00 PM
James, oh yes winter is on its way here in Canada too, in fact it snowed today, I sort of like the first snowfalls, but as winter progresses not so much, well done ~
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/12/2018 8:44:00 PM
Thanks Dear Heart! I agree...gotta watch out for fallin' on ice and stuff like that...
Date: 11/12/2018 6:21:00 AM
Wow.. this write was pure joy to read. I’m grateful for your skilled hand and creative mind, James!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/12/2018 8:29:00 PM
Thanks LM!
Date: 11/11/2018 7:55:00 AM
Awesome imagery in your poem..getting ready for winter..beautiful is your northern state. Good write, James.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/12/2018 8:30:00 PM
Thank you Vijay!
Date: 11/11/2018 7:16:00 AM
You are such a gentle soul. I see you have had your first snowfall. Here all we caught was a glimpse, mostly rain. Still, I know its on its way, Have a great day dear James. All the best
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/12/2018 1:10:00 AM
Gracias, Pixie!
Date: 11/10/2018 6:35:00 PM
So true. I enjoyed this poem. I can relate to it completely :) Stay warm !
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/12/2018 1:10:00 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 11/10/2018 4:18:00 PM
what attention to details which make this work ever vivid in a season of flurries, jimbo... love it!..huggs
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/10/2018 4:59:00 PM
Thanks Nette!
Date: 11/9/2018 3:38:00 PM
lovely write indeed
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/9/2018 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Jack, nice to see you!
Date: 11/9/2018 12:11:00 PM
So much to consider in this poem, James. It allows me to see the "north country" from your perspective, complete with the preparations you make before venturing out. Spring will come again, but winter can be beautiful too, so enjoy! Beautifully composed, reminiscent of Robert Frost...
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 11/9/2018 4:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carolyn!

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