Snow White

First Snow

Daylight~
My world is covered with pure white snow

Untarnished

The branches of the red pine out my
Window, softly comforted with a thin blanket
Of downy fluff      streets, unmarked by soot,
Await transgressions of human movement.

One contemplates at such times~
Hats, snow boots, scarves, packers and
Don't forget to throw the heavy survival blanket
I bought from Joyners in Grand Marais Mn...
(On one of my annual camping trips to the far
North with my daughters as they were
Growing up, showing them where to find 
Peace in the real world God Created)
...Into the backseat of my car for those
Unexpected moments when caught outside
Demands prolonged warmth to avoid frostbite.

Naturally, one takes personal inventory
At such times, compensations really,
Mostly age related, necessities for making
It over the winter hump to hoped for, Spring.

There are tools I engage > seed catalogs begin
Arriving, thoughts of renewal, both of nature
And myself emerge in my thinking. 
Am I worthy of such a renaissance? are there
Apologies or pleas of forgiveness needed?

Satisfied with conclusions, I convince myself
To venture forth in this clean slate ouside,
Properly self-chastened to avoid past potholes,
And enjoin my gentle imprints with other
Intrepid wanderers of the north country.

~ early November in Minnesota '18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 6:20 PM
John, I love everything about freshly fallen snow and I love the introspective beauty of your superb poem. I was drawn into your snow white world by the captivating power of your imagery, emotions and poetic artistry. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Goff Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Thanks Susan!
Raven Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 6:09 AM
Hi James, love the creativity in your writes. I do love the snow. I just love the feeling of peace that it gives me. It is cold enough for snow here in Scotland my friend. Your poetic gem touches me. I do love your thoughts. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
Vaso Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 2:28 AM
Last week we had out first snow, so lovely like this poem. however this week, we have more snow, and more snow and more snow!!!!!!! LOL
Nicole Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 10:50 PM
The snow is pure and your thoughts take me there in the moment. To embrace beauty all around, nature- the wonder of it all. Before everything becomes, tarnished again. This is beautiful in so many ways. ~ Brandy
Goff Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 12:45 AM
Thank you Brandy!
Proxenos Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Hi James, Always prepared for any situation when you travel, you sound like my husband! Enjoyed your vivid imagination about winter and your impending joy of a spring shorty to arrive! A wonderful write James, well done! Best wishes, Jennifer
Goff Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 1:41 PM
Thank you Jennifer!
Horsman Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Love this, James, you take one on a journey, with your wonderful words..
Goff Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Nice to seeya, Harry! Happy Thanksgiving, my friend!
La France Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:15 PM
James, oh yes winter is on its way here in Canada too, in fact it snowed today, I sort of like the first snowfalls, but as winter progresses not so much, well done ~
Goff Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Thanks Dear Heart! I agree...gotta watch out for fallin' on ice and stuff like that...
Man Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 6:21 AM
Wow.. this write was pure joy to read. I’m grateful for your skilled hand and creative mind, James!
Goff Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Thanks LM!
Pandit Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 7:55 AM
Awesome imagery in your poem..getting ready for winter..beautiful is your northern state. Good write, James.
Goff Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 8:30 PM
Thank you Vijay!
Rose  Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 7:16 AM
You are such a gentle soul. I see you have had your first snowfall. Here all we caught was a glimpse, mostly rain. Still, I know its on its way, Have a great day dear James. All the best
Goff Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 1:10 AM
Gracias, Pixie!
Sands Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 6:35 PM
So true. I enjoyed this poem. I can relate to it completely :) Stay warm !
Goff Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 1:10 AM
Thank you Heidi!
Onclaud Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 4:18 PM
what attention to details which make this work ever vivid in a season of flurries, jimbo... love it!..huggs
Goff Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Thanks Nette!
Horne Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 3:38 PM
lovely write indeed
Goff Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Thanks Jack, nice to see you!
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November 9, 2018 at 12:11 PM
So much to consider in this poem, James. It allows me to see the "north country" from your perspective, complete with the preparations you make before venturing out. Spring will come again, but winter can be beautiful too, so enjoy! Beautifully composed, reminiscent of Robert Frost...
Goff Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Thank you so much, Carolyn!
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