Snow Tube

the snow tube spins heading South down icy slide — exciting screams 12/7/2018

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/8/2018 12:35:00 PM

I was sledding with 18 seven-year-old girl scout brownies the day before my youngest daughter was born. I had forgotten this until now. Thanks for the memory, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2018 5:27:00 PM

So glad my haiku brought a good memory to mind! Thanks for sharing.

Constance La France

Date: 12/8/2018 11:23:00 AM

Kim, wonderful, well done, I recall sliding down hills at warp speed as a child ~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2018 5:28:00 PM

So much fun, sweet lady!

Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram

Date: 12/8/2018 7:10:00 AM

fine wordings...best wishes

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2018 5:33:00 PM

Thank you, Kaa!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/8/2018 6:49:00 AM

Lovely haiku Kim so few words paint a vivid picture :-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2018 8:33:00 AM

Thank you, Jan! I love how ku’s can briefly keep a diary for yourself and others around you. Fun fun fun for me! Happy Holidays, sweet Jan!