Snow Space

Can't blot her freezing— Winter falls 'lest a lone star Grasps her emptiness.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2023 11:08:00 AM

Love this, Paige

Silent One

Date: 12/1/2023 11:46:00 PM

Deep haiku...sometimes nothing portray the emptiness we feel...

Christina Bowring

Date: 12/1/2023 10:53:00 AM

This is a very creative Haiku Paige and I love the title too. Very imaginative and well crafted. Enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend :):)

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/30/2023 10:58:00 PM

very impressive message, Paige; an haiku very delicate and imaginative, enjoyed so yann

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/30/2023 7:29:00 AM

Paige, your Haiku is truly exquisite. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Blessings

Ink Empress

Date: 11/29/2023 7:33:00 PM

Ahh how evocative and touching is this haiku. You are just so very talented and your way with words truly leaves me in awe amazed. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/29/2023 4:01:00 PM

an exquisite Haiku, Paige. I liked it...have a splendid evening, Sara