Snow Rain

White gown flows like wind blown snow
Even with delicate features, she rides magnificent creatures
Her attributes, heavenly shaped curves, delicious smile
Divine jewel green eyes like set emeralds
With powerful and fine hands she steers her steed
Dynamic cloven hooves pound the passing earth
Snow capped mountains swell with each gait
Toward the towering castle of her dwelling


for the contest "Rain the story"
Nick Faber
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 7:52 PM
Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Nick! Always, Annalise
Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 9:29 AM
Congratulations Nick on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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January 13, 2011 at 4:31 PM
Very nice, Nick. congratulations on your win in this contest. LUv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations Nick on your entry and win in this delightful contest.
Mehta Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 6:40 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Constance, nick
Mehta Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 9:19 PM
Many Congrats Nick on big win with this imaginative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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January 12, 2011 at 8:39 PM
Congrats Nick on your amazing win in the Rain Story contest with this elegant entry my friend.. enjoy a top ten victory with luv..
La France Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 8:13 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest~~
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