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Snow Rain

White gown flows like wind blown snow Even with delicate features, she rides magnificent creatures Her attributes, heavenly shaped curves, delicious smile Divine jewel green eyes like set emeralds With powerful and fine hands she steers her steed Dynamic cloven hooves pound the passing earth Snow capped mountains swell with each gait Toward the towering castle of her dwelling for the contest "Rain the story" Nick Faber

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/16/2011 7:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Nick! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations Nick on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:31:00 PM
Very nice, Nick. congratulations on your win in this contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations Nick on your entry and win in this delightful contest.
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Constance, nick
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:19:00 PM
Many Congrats Nick on big win with this imaginative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:39:00 PM
Congrats Nick on your amazing win in the Rain Story contest with this elegant entry my friend.. enjoy a top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 1/6/2011 8:13:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest~~
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