Snow Queens Invitation

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Macabre icicles dangle from Winter’s chandelier, chilling
the chamber of the queen, lachrymose lighting for dears.
Children feel her icy breath against their cherub cheeks,
shivering from shoulders to feet - she promised them treats.

Squid tentacles, icicles from ceiling to floor, edge doorways.
The children suck frozen pops — in summertime they’d
make them smile but instead a chattering appears from
the queen, ear to ear, “Eat up, children. There’s more!”

Cold water droplets eek from the ceiling like scurrying mice
landing on the tip of the nose and fingers, lingering too long,
until icicles form, make no mistake — the storm is cruel!
“Stand back!” an older brother’s armed with flaming torches.

Winter is sweet for sweethearts, Morgan bells, hot cocoa,
but this Winter scene is vomitus. Only one chess piece
moves in this Winterscape. The older brother’s interrupted
the nestle of plum-children in sleigh beds, so white and pale.

Snowlids open, slowly the children’s limbs stretch and crack,
melting like snowmen. Crackling’s all around, like a scream.
Kids swivel their necks and find a warm cave, no queen.
Brother scolds for a second or two, serves them hot chocolate.


12/23/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/25/2020 12:20:00 PM
Wonderful fantastical tale, imagination reflects hot in this chilly tale Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2020 7:38:00 PM
Thank you! I enjoyed writing it!
Date: 12/25/2020 1:50:00 AM
What a story. Your muse is on highest level. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2020 8:17:00 AM
Thank you! It comes and goes. I cling...
Date: 12/23/2020 2:39:00 PM
You've been riding a galloping muse, Kim:) Your imagination had a field day, and your readers are benefitting from it! ~ Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2020 4:13:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/23/2020 12:48:00 PM
Oh my, I got lost in your beautiful creative mind with this. Thank you for sharing, Kim. Merry Christmas from my heart. xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2020 4:13:00 PM
Glad you liked it! Thanks! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/23/2020 10:03:00 AM
A beautiful vision appears as I read, the vision is the chilling chamber of the Queen. A chandelier of icicles I once had just outside my back door, your poem brought back the memory, I should have taken its photograph, that’s for sure. A delightful winter write Kim. Merry Christmas ~ Belle
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2020 10:45:00 AM
Thank you! Merry Christmas!
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