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Snow On the Mountain

snow on the mountain
dark lines and grooves visible....
love continues still
spring swiftly erupts
the mountain hidden by snow....
love breaks through the chill
unthawed snow remains
through seasons even summer....
everlasting love
soon another fall 
decorated with color....
love deepens with time
winter reaches deep
roots still untouched by hard freeze....
love binds two made one
vows made, together for life
the warm hearth fire blazes high

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2023

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The Situation Date: 8/12/2023 1:15:00 PM We are headed in that direction. We write while God molds with winds and water.His chemistry changes colors. while rotations give the orders. And snow for a while covers our sins and makes us loved again. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/13/2023 4:17:00 AM Yes, in a spiritual sense, we become whiter than snow when we accept and ask Jesus into our hearts. TS, thank you for dropping by and for the kind review of my work.

Joe Dimino Date: 8/11/2023 5:08:00 PM Love indeed reaches great heights, transitioning all seasons. Lovely poem, splendid analogy. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/12/2023 12:49:00 PM Why thank you, Joe. I appreciate the compliment. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 8/11/2023 10:02:00 AM love on a mountain can last a very long time, remain in higher places dear friend, this is where you belong :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/11/2023 10:07:00 AM Mystic Rose, Sometimes I would like to be on the mountain then again next to the sea, but where I am is where I'll be. Thanks for the visit and kind review of my work. Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 8/11/2023 5:29:00 AM oh what a lovely choka, which is an interesting form in itself..many thanks for my placement in your contest :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/11/2023 10:00:00 AM Charlotte, I appreciate you dropping by with thanks and taking time to read my work and comment. Sara

Sotto Poet Date: 8/10/2023 7:25:00 PM Truly, this composition is exquisitely crafted. I am captivated by the profound correlation between the enduring resilience of snow-clad peaks throughout arduous seasons and the unwavering nature of genuine affection. Such sentiments, Sara, are undeniably magnificent. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/11/2023 1:35:00 AM Why, thank you, Lasaad. Even though it doesn't seem possible today love can endure for a lifetime. Your review is uplifting. Sara

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/10/2023 7:06:00 PM This is a lovely poem, Sara. Inspirationally romantic... Just wondering how you got that four-letter word --- SnoX --- past the censors! lol. (It's a four-letter word for me, esp. now that I have balance issues) Oh, well... Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/11/2023 1:31:00 AM Gershon, My husband has balance issues as well and sometimes for me also. A sad part of growing older. Thank you for your kind review of my work and seeing the deeper meaning behind it even though thought out simply. Sara

Janice Canerdy Date: 8/10/2023 6:30:00 AM Sara, this is a lovely, descriptive piece on the "seasons" of love! Janice Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2023 6:36:00 AM Thank you, Janice. Your visit was uplifting. Sara

Mike Gentile Date: 8/10/2023 4:29:00 AM I love the connection as snow on the mountain survives the grueling seasons, so then does true love!! Just beautiful Sara!!! Happy Thursday xxoo Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2023 6:33:00 AM Why, thank you, Mike. I still believe that love can come through to the other side of hard times and aging. Thanks for dropping by . Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/10/2023 4:15:00 AM - Reminds me of the winter that will come ... no romantic feeling for me ... too cold, Sara :) - A beautiful poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2023 6:30:00 AM Anne-Lise, I agree that full on winter is very cold and the cold hurts so much more in old age. One thing about it though it makes us look forward to spring. Your visits always add a special touch. Sara

Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/10/2023 2:15:00 AM A wonderful Choka poem Sara, love on a snow capped mountain, very romantic… Belle Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2023 2:33:00 AM Thank you, Belle. Your visit adds a special flavor to the page. Sara

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/9/2023 8:01:00 PM Deep imagery, Sara, of love and romance that stays strong through all seasons:) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2023 2:08:00 AM Why, thank you, Joanna. I appreciate the smile. Sara

Valsa George Date: 8/9/2023 7:27:00 PM On the mountain tops there will be snow even after winter retreats ! It is a lovely sight ! A beautiful setting where romance flourishes ! All the Best in the contest dear Sara ! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2023 2:07:00 AM Thank you for the best in the contest. I have not been close to a mountain range so high that there is snow year-round, but I know that has to be a beautiful view plus it would give a person hope in the heat of summer that there will come a cooling down. Sara

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/9/2023 7:14:00 PM Sara, reading this I might think that you are a romantic or something. Smiles, Gershon Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2023 2:04:00 AM Yes, Gershon, I am a romantic at heart, even bad situations can't stamp out true feelings. I like the smile and the nice review. Sara

The Situation Date: 8/9/2023 6:24:00 PM North of here are snow capped mountians. If they survived the heat that lasted so long. I see the marriage of snow to the mountian. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2023 2:03:00 AM Yes, TS, God intended for marriage to last a lifetime like some bird species are mates for a lifetime. However, today I think young people say well if it doesn't work out there is always divorce. Your visit is encouraging. Sara