Snow Ninteenfiftysix

Snow 1956

Snowy night, streets were covered in a calm, 
carpet of white and since it was Sunday morning, 
with few cars about, the grubby town looked as 
beautiful as a fairy tale; till Monday, when traffic 
would churn snow into yellow, dirty slush and 
people, in black or drab grey, would have mist 
coming out of their mouths as they moaned about 
the weather. In the park, the snow would last for 
days and I could make my footprints large by
subbing my feet on white ground land contrasting 
black trees and pale sky made for stark beauty; in 
front of park benches where old men sat, talking 
ships. Tobacco spittle. Winter 1956, colours only 
appeared in comic strips, and in western movies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/6/2019 10:53:00 AM
something soothes me in the beauty of fresh fallen snow, but it never lasts long because it's dirtied and marked up easily...enjoyed the scene you set in this one :)
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 8/7/2019 6:17:00 AM
thank you, Sandra Adams
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