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Snow 1956 Snowy night, streets were covered in a calm, carpet of white and since it was Sunday morning, with few cars about, the grubby town looked as beautiful as a fairy tale; till Monday, when traffic would churn snow into yellow, dirty slush and people, in black or drab grey, would have mist coming out of their mouths as they moaned about the weather. In the park, the snow would last for days and I could make my footprints large by subbing my feet on white ground land contrasting black trees and pale sky made for stark beauty; in front of park benches where old men sat, talking ships. Tobacco spittle. Winter 1956, colours only appeared in comic strips, and in western movies.

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Date: 8/6/2019 10:53:00 AM
something soothes me in the beauty of fresh fallen snow, but it never lasts long because it's dirtied and marked up easily...enjoyed the scene you set in this one :)
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 8/7/2019 6:17:00 AM
thank you, Sandra Adams

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