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Snow, Like You

I saw a snowflake drift silently past my window . . . and I watched as it danced and turned . . . It was so real ~ so full of life! Finally, I could stand it no longer. I swung wide my window and let it float in. It melted away . . . I was left with a beautiful memory ~ a drop of water on my fingertip, my lips. I couldn’t understand how it could have changed . . . so quickly, so silently . . . I only wanted to reach out to it ~ and care for it. Yet alas, a snowflake . . . as you, must be touched gently.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/23/2020 11:43:00 AM
Gently, sweetly, and perfectly written-thanks Pax, Linda
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Date: 11/4/2019 7:22:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful....and another.....BEAUTIFUL. From the title to the final line.
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Date: 11/6/2019 8:35:00 PM
I appreciate your thoughtful words, I do. I've missed and neglected to reply to comments, partly being new to this site yet am catching up.

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