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Snow in the South

Jack Frost got me hustling To clear my car of excess snow Bare brown branches bustling As frigid blue breeze blows The forecast was right or wrong As I sit in the car heating it up On the radio red Christmas songs Sing along makes freezing fun enough I watch a parent play with child Shaking tree to sprinkle white flurries Warm eyes that twinkle as they smile Despite chill no one really hurries When it snows in the south People take notice in awe gaze Kids squeal with joy so loud As they gather it in hands amazed Purple panic shoppers raspberry react Buying bread milk eggs in excess We giggle at their inability to relax And see snow days as God blessed Despite the nights spent so cold Someone who lacks winter heat May be a poor homeless soul Or you due to a car wreck on street Snow in the south is a white dream Everything seems to take it easy Coffee tea and cocoa hot we drink With warm hearts despite freezing

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Date: 12/10/2024 4:08:00 PM
Wow! Experienced some lovely flurries (all day) for Thanksgiving on vacation!
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/10/2024 4:28:00 PM
Lovely! I bet that was beautiful!
Date: 12/9/2024 6:43:00 PM
Karen we got four feet in six days. I have been dealing with snow all my life. /sometimes it is beautiful but other times it can do you harm. People have heart attacks shoveling snow. I have a riding snowblower I do three of my neighbors driveways when I snowblower. It is a lot of work here in upstate NY. Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 12/8/2024 11:15:00 PM
Dear sweet karen, this is so beautiful and made me want to be in snow right now as i read this, especially “ Snow in the south is a white dream” how dreamy and magical! I absolutely love the flow and rhymes too here. Youv written a very observant take , with lil details of parents enjoying the moment with kids etc! It must be snowing there? Ah i wish i can see pics of where you are at, its quite sunny today here where i am at: sending you light always
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/8/2024 11:33:00 PM
It did snow quit a bit but has melted now dear Inky! I did take pictures but not before the sidewalk was shoveled lol. Thanks
Date: 12/6/2024 7:41:00 PM
You make snow sound fun, but then you mention the South. Southern snow is lovely, and doesn't last too long. I love the warmth and chill of your poem.
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/6/2024 10:19:00 PM
Hugs Hilda and thanks for liking.
Date: 12/5/2024 5:53:00 PM
Doing things with the snow covering has an appeal not withstanding its freezing nature. For many skiing and snowball pranks makes it fun time. Imagery lay such a nostalgic vibes it's hard to accept the accidents and despair. Nice write.
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/5/2024 6:18:00 PM
Thanks Weston!
Date: 12/4/2024 11:24:00 PM
I do love the winter landscape but nowadays prefer to watch it from indoors. Hope your week is going well Karen. Tom
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/5/2024 4:54:00 AM
Thanks Tom I am having a blessed week.! Hope you are too!

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