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Poor Frosty was built upside down And quickly he’s talk of the town He is not wearing smalls - People see his snowballs! His smile has turned into a frown! Upside down world Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper 12-23-17

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Roy Pett

Date: 1/7/2018 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Jan with this brilliant limerick. :))

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 7:39:00 PM

Thanks so much Roy:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/6/2018 3:35:00 PM

Congrats, Jan, adorable limerick.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 7:39:00 PM

Thanks so much Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/6/2018 12:43:00 PM

I am admiring your snowballs Jan. Congrats on your top placement. Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 7:40:00 PM

lol Thanks so much Rick:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/6/2018 12:40:00 AM

As expected, no balls-up with this verse, Jan, well done! Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thanks so much Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 1/5/2018 11:50:00 PM

ahahaha! awesome! congrats :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 7:44:00 PM

Thanks so much LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2018 9:07:00 PM

Yours deserved a first place. Truly one of the best of all. I am thinking of you tonight. Could not be online much today but I hope all is ok with you , sweet friend. Congrats on this win.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 7:45:00 PM

Thanks for that awesome compliment Andrea I have come a long way from when i wrote my first limericks back in 2014!!! I really need to get round to editing them and getting that book together!:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/5/2018 8:51:00 PM

Hi Jan, I'm just coming to say congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 7:48:00 PM

Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Mick Talbot

Date: 1/5/2018 7:54:00 PM

A Xmas cracker, congratulations on your win Jan... hugs, Mick

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 7:49:00 PM

lol Thanks so much Mick:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2018 7:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan, thank you for writing a great :) Limerick. Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 7:49:00 PM

Thanks so much for a top placement Eve I had such fun with the theme and the picture was hilarious:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/5/2018 6:17:00 PM

I'm laughing at Viv - he is so amusing! Came to congratulate you, you did a great job with this, as you do with all limericks. Always a joy, Jan. Love ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2018 7:50:00 PM

I agree with you Mr Viv is so so funny CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 12/25/2017 1:37:00 AM

I assume it's the government cuts, that have left him with miniscule nuts...... Janeriffic poem, good luck x

Eve Roper
Date: 1/5/2018 7:35:00 PM

Jan Allison
Date: 12/25/2017 1:42:00 AM

ha ha ha yes they snipped his assets:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 12/24/2017 8:15:00 AM

Brilliant as usual Jan, GL in contest and I wish you and yours a merry Christmas and a happy new year. :))

Jan Allison
Date: 12/24/2017 9:02:00 AM

Thanks Roy:-) I've got the best Christmas gift ... my son is home for Christmas I want for nothing more:-) have a wonderful time over the festive period:-) hugs Jan xx

John Michaels

Date: 12/24/2017 6:25:00 AM

Very funny and topical Limerick, Jan. Can always rely on you to make me laugh. Merry Christmas! John!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/24/2017 9:00:00 AM

I do try to make folks smile John but occasionally I do write a more serious poem:-) have a wonderful time over the festive period:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/24/2017 1:43:00 AM

So funny, reminds me a commenter on last poem!!! LMAO if you take away the S and W that is!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/24/2017 8:58:00 AM

Behave Mr Vaso lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2017 8:08:00 PM

VERY good, Jan. I am melting away trying to think up what to say about this snowman!! I sure hope you are having a good Xmas. Is your son there yet? HUGS!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/24/2017 8:58:00 AM

Cheers Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/23/2017 2:13:00 PM

- I love that snowman you find him on my poem "- Bethlehem Star And The Snowman -" :))) ... so glad to see your pen still smiling, Jan - Awesome - Merry Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2017 2:33:00 PM

My pen is smiling Anne Lise I will never be deterred from writing no matter what stunts some folks try to pull:-)I loved the pic that you posted and now Eve has posted it to inspire us to writefor the contest hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 12/23/2017 12:57:00 PM

they'll also see that his snowballs will be the first thing to melt

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2017 2:34:00 PM

ha ha ha Frederic:-) hugs jan xx

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/23/2017 10:50:00 AM

Lol! How adorable :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2017 2:34:00 PM

Thanks Akkina:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/23/2017 9:41:00 AM

Lol! Jan, You did again. Your poem worked well with the photo. Great imagery as well.You rock at this form. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2017 9:50:00 AM

I love the limerick form and find them so easy to write this one took about 3 minutes:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/23/2017 8:02:00 AM

Ha ha, I guess the cold has shrunk frosty’s balls.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2017 8:54:00 AM

Pure genius in your answer Richard! Merry Christmas and Happy new year to you and your family:-) hugs jan xx

John Gondolf

Date: 12/23/2017 7:59:00 AM

Great limerick, Jan, it started my day with a chuckle. John

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2017 8:54:00 AM

I don't usually rush to post a contest poem but I was up at 6.30 am and saw the theme and couldn't resist the challenge:-) hugs jan xx

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 12/23/2017 1:48:00 AM

Lol! Jan, I love this! Charming and witty. Good luck in the contest. Best for a win.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2017 1:55:00 AM

I couldn't resist a limerick challenge Rhoda:-) hugs jan xx

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/23/2017 1:17:00 AM

what a cute limerick, good luck in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2017 1:21:00 AM

Thanks Francine, I can rarely turn down a limerick challenge and I couldn't resist using snowballs lol:-) so lovely to see you back on soup. I hope you have a wonderful time over the festive period and my very best wishes for 2018:-) hugs jan xx