Jan Allison Poet Limerick

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Snow Balls

Poor Frosty was built upside down
And quickly he’s talk of the town
He is not wearing smalls  -
People see his snowballs!
His smile has turned into a frown!

Upside down world Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper

12-23-17

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Roy Pett January 7, 2018 at 10:08 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Jan with this brilliant limerick. :)) Jan Allison January 13, 2018 at 7:39 PM Thanks so much Roy:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier January 6, 2018 at 3:35 PM Congrats, Jan, adorable limerick. Jan Allison January 13, 2018 at 7:39 PM Thanks so much Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux January 6, 2018 at 12:43 PM I am admiring your snowballs Jan. Congrats on your top placement. Hugs Rick. Jan Allison January 13, 2018 at 7:40 PM lol Thanks so much Rick:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley January 6, 2018 at 12:40 AM As expected, no balls-up with this verse, Jan, well done! Viv x Jan Allison January 13, 2018 at 7:40 PM Thanks so much Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars January 5, 2018 at 11:50 PM ahahaha! awesome! congrats :)-luloo Jan Allison January 13, 2018 at 7:44 PM Thanks so much LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2018 at 9:07 PM Yours deserved a first place. Truly one of the best of all. I am thinking of you tonight. Could not be online much today but I hope all is ok with you , sweet friend. Congrats on this win. Jan Allison January 13, 2018 at 7:45 PM Thanks for that awesome compliment Andrea I have come a long way from when i wrote my first limericks back in 2014!!! I really need to get round to editing them and getting that book together!:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. January 5, 2018 at 8:51 PM Hi Jan, I'm just coming to say congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis Jan Allison January 13, 2018 at 7:48 PM Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Mick Talbot January 5, 2018 at 7:54 PM A Xmas cracker, congratulations on your win Jan... hugs, Mick Jan Allison January 13, 2018 at 7:49 PM lol Thanks so much Mick:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper January 5, 2018 at 7:35 PM Congratulations on your win, Jan, thank you for writing a great :) Limerick. Hugs Eve ~`* Jan Allison January 13, 2018 at 7:49 PM Thanks so much for a top placement Eve I had such fun with the theme and the picture was hilarious:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin January 5, 2018 at 6:17 PM I'm laughing at Viv - he is so amusing! Came to congratulate you, you did a great job with this, as you do with all limericks. Always a joy, Jan. Love ... CayCay Jan Allison January 13, 2018 at 7:50 PM I agree with you Mr Viv is so so funny CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley December 25, 2017 at 1:37 AM I assume it's the government cuts, that have left him with miniscule nuts...... Janeriffic poem, good luck x Eve Roper January 5, 2018 at 7:35 PM :) Jan Allison December 25, 2017 at 1:42 AM ha ha ha yes they snipped his assets:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett December 24, 2017 at 8:15 AM Brilliant as usual Jan, GL in contest and I wish you and yours a merry Christmas and a happy new year. :)) Jan Allison December 24, 2017 at 9:02 AM Thanks Roy:-) I've got the best Christmas gift ... my son is home for Christmas I want for nothing more:-) have a wonderful time over the festive period:-) hugs Jan xx

John Michaels December 24, 2017 at 6:25 AM Very funny and topical Limerick, Jan. Can always rely on you to make me laugh. Merry Christmas! John! Jan Allison December 24, 2017 at 9:00 AM I do try to make folks smile John but occasionally I do write a more serious poem:-) have a wonderful time over the festive period:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso December 24, 2017 at 1:43 AM So funny, reminds me a commenter on last poem!!! LMAO if you take away the S and W that is!!! Jan Allison December 24, 2017 at 8:58 AM Behave Mr Vaso lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 23, 2017 at 8:08 PM VERY good, Jan. I am melting away trying to think up what to say about this snowman!! I sure hope you are having a good Xmas. Is your son there yet? HUGS! Jan Allison December 24, 2017 at 8:58 AM Cheers Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen December 23, 2017 at 2:13 PM - I love that snowman you find him on my poem "- Bethlehem Star And The Snowman -" :))) ... so glad to see your pen still smiling, Jan - Awesome - Merry Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison December 23, 2017 at 2:33 PM My pen is smiling Anne Lise I will never be deterred from writing no matter what stunts some folks try to pull:-)I loved the pic that you posted and now Eve has posted it to inspire us to writefor the contest hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker December 23, 2017 at 12:57 PM they'll also see that his snowballs will be the first thing to melt Jan Allison December 23, 2017 at 2:34 PM ha ha ha Frederic:-) hugs jan xx

Akkina Downing December 23, 2017 at 10:50 AM Lol! How adorable :) Jan Allison December 23, 2017 at 2:34 PM Thanks Akkina:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. December 23, 2017 at 9:41 AM Lol! Jan, You did again. Your poem worked well with the photo. Great imagery as well.You rock at this form. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Jan Allison December 23, 2017 at 9:50 AM I love the limerick form and find them so easy to write this one took about 3 minutes:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux December 23, 2017 at 8:02 AM Ha ha, I guess the cold has shrunk frosty’s balls. Jan Allison December 23, 2017 at 8:54 AM Pure genius in your answer Richard! Merry Christmas and Happy new year to you and your family:-) hugs jan xx

John Gondolf December 23, 2017 at 7:59 AM Great limerick, Jan, it started my day with a chuckle. John Jan Allison December 23, 2017 at 8:54 AM I don't usually rush to post a contest poem but I was up at 6.30 am and saw the theme and couldn't resist the challenge:-) hugs jan xx

Rhoda Tripp December 23, 2017 at 1:48 AM Lol! Jan, I love this! Charming and witty. Good luck in the contest. Best for a win. Jan Allison December 23, 2017 at 1:55 AM I couldn't resist a limerick challenge Rhoda:-) hugs jan xx

Francine Roberts December 23, 2017 at 1:17 AM what a cute limerick, good luck in the contest Jan Allison December 23, 2017 at 1:21 AM Thanks Francine, I can rarely turn down a limerick challenge and I couldn't resist using snowballs lol:-) so lovely to see you back on soup. I hope you have a wonderful time over the festive period and my very best wishes for 2018:-) hugs jan xx