Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

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Snow

Slumbering, I dreamed that

Sugar crystals drifted

Softly from pink sky till

Sunrise, when I awoke.

Sweetness greeted my eyes.

Sifted by angels, it

Shimmered in winter’s dawn.


Written Nov. 19, 2015

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Sam Kauffman February 7, 2020 at 10:49 PM Andrea, This is so lovely - soft as snowflakes falling. Congratulations!

Michael Tor December 1, 2015 at 4:44 PM Congratulations on your win Andrea!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 29, 2015 at 10:48 PM Wonderful imagery Andrea... lovely pic.. congrats on ur first place win!!

Daver Austin November 29, 2015 at 1:17 PM Thanks for the great picture, poem too. Love, daver

Sandra Haight November 29, 2015 at 8:23 AM Beautiful, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Sandra

Anisha Dutta November 29, 2015 at 7:23 AM Congrats to win the first place. Nice composition with nice photograph. wonderfully done. Anisha D

David Mohn November 28, 2015 at 9:35 PM Sweet poem and placement Andrea...your falling snow picture is entrancing :)

Alexis Y. November 28, 2015 at 6:33 PM Andrea, this is such a beautiful sight! Congrats on your win:-) Alexis

Skat A November 28, 2015 at 3:22 PM WOW, you just made winter sound so pleasing... Impressed... Andrea, Congrats on your fine win, SKAT LOVE

Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 7:08 AM Angels sifting snow.. how lovely....congrats, Andrea.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 28, 2015 at 5:05 AM Congratulations Andrea

John Hamilton November 27, 2015 at 11:04 PM Congrats on first place excellent poem. JDH

Eve Roper November 27, 2015 at 8:26 PM Andrea, I like the subject you chose imagery is beautiful , congratulations on your 1st place win. Eve

Connie Marcum Wong November 27, 2015 at 5:06 PM I am not surprised to see this in the top spot Andrea! Excellent. Congratulations on your wonderful win. I wanted to write a poem for this contest but ran out of time. I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving. Hugs, Connie

Jill Spagnola November 27, 2015 at 5:06 PM sweet 7 for you congratulations to you.. and I'm givin myself props for being under you on this same list as yourself, along with Constance and so many others from the top of our community...:), jill

Jan Allison November 27, 2015 at 4:45 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman November 27, 2015 at 3:14 PM Andrea, so glad you entered my contest! I loved the imagery in this! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, KIm

Constance La France November 23, 2015 at 9:04 AM Andrea, beautifully penned, and a lovely image, best of luck in the contest ~

Scott Thirtyseven November 22, 2015 at 5:31 PM Lovely image, and a cosy feel. Nice piece of writing. As for Haibun-Freeastyle, if the bit that follows the prose looks like a poem, or even smells like a poem, then it's in. So go for it, create away.

Kp Nunez November 21, 2015 at 8:19 PM This is so beautiful, Andie. Loved the gif as well. Thanks for everything. hugs!

Connie Marcum Wong November 21, 2015 at 3:46 PM I loved your entry Andrea, especially your ending. Congratulations on your win with this beauty. It was a top winner in my book!

Lin Lane November 21, 2015 at 4:01 AM Soft and sweet, just like the words of your poem. Congratulations, Andrea.

Jan Allison November 21, 2015 at 3:46 AM Beautifully penned Andrea - this would fit Kim's contest too:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 21, 2015 at 12:01 AM How lovely Andrea .. congrats on awesome win!

Maurice Rigoler November 20, 2015 at 8:18 PM Andrea, to use photos with your poems contact Soup headquarters (email) and should give you directions. I've done this before with them and they've been very helpful. Lovely poem, but I hate snow. /M

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