Snow

Simple water vapor
Seeping into fair clouds
Slowly forming crystals
Sipping air, fluffy white
Sleek look on polar tops
Sheets of ice just two now
Screams Hot-Earth and melts fast

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David Crandall

February 3, 2025 at 6:57 PM

a nice view into wonderful water in its many forms!

Reason A. Poteet

January 8, 2025 at 11:42 AM

Congrats to you, thriveni. We could wish here in S. Indiana for hot-earth. School is officially closed for the third week of winter break. I haven't been out of the house since Saturday - ice is not melting.

thriveni c mysore

January 9, 2025 at 7:48 PM

Oh! perplexing life this is. science wishes the ice to melt slow! Parts of the world wish the ice to melt! your comment is precious for me now, as I can foresee the winter woes too. Thank you dear poet, I am grateful to you for your kind visit, brings me joy. Thank you.

Paige Hind

January 6, 2025 at 8:21 PM

I loved this. I see it was a winner. "Sheets of ice just two now Screams Hot-Earth and melts fast"

thriveni c mysore

January 7, 2025 at 5:43 AM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you liked it, Yes just two icesheets left. They are the source of freshwater to the globe, did you know that? they are so very important. Being in Temperate zone I have never seen the snow! thanks again.

Charlotte Puddifoot

January 3, 2025 at 8:22 AM

enjoyed reading your well written pleiades - congrats on your contest placement

thriveni c mysore

January 4, 2025 at 6:43 PM

Ah, thank you for your pleasant visit dear poet. thank you for the congratulations, I am glad you liked it. Blessings & cheers.

Valsa George

January 2, 2025 at 8:47 PM

Thriveni, this is just awesome. Congratulations, dear friend. Wish you a Happy New Year.

thriveni c mysore

January 4, 2025 at 6:42 PM

Thank you for the kind visit dear friend. I am glad you liked my thoughts on snow! As we have never seen snow, I could not explain it like others. Thank you for the wishes and blessings. New Year blessings to your Happy writing.

Janice Canerdy

January 2, 2025 at 8:18 PM

Thriveni, CONGRATS on your win with this descriptive piece. Janice

thriveni c mysore

January 4, 2025 at 6:39 PM

Thank you so much dear poet, I am so glad by your visit and happy words. Thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 2, 2025 at 1:41 PM

A fascinating tale of snow, Thriveni! Congratulations on your win. :)

thriveni c mysore

January 4, 2025 at 6:22 PM

Thank you dear poet for your kind visit. I am so glad you liked it, thank you for the pleasant words. Cheers!!!

Sam Kauffman

January 2, 2025 at 11:46 AM

Congratulations on your win, Thriveni! What wonderful, very creative images - "sipping air," "sheets of ice." Snow so perfectly described in seven lines! So happy to see you on the winners list! Blessings of health and happiness for 2025, dear friend!

thriveni c mysore

January 4, 2025 at 6:21 PM

Thank you dear poet for your kind visit. I am so glad you liked it, means so much to me. I am grateful to you for the blessings of health and happiness. My respects, thank you.

Victor Buhagiar

January 2, 2025 at 10:44 AM

My congratulations on your win.!

thriveni c mysore

January 2, 2025 at 5:43 PM

Thank you for your kind visit and sweet words dear poet. Blessings & best wishes.

Marilene Evans

January 2, 2025 at 9:09 AM

Congratulations! Now, I just learned something new about snow, thank you. Blessings.

thriveni c mysore

January 2, 2025 at 5:43 PM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Yes there is some serious melting of ice. Thank you for the blessings dear friend. Best wishes.

Terry Miller

January 2, 2025 at 7:48 AM

Lovely poem, I lived in New England for some years and the snow was lovely, back in old England now not much snow just greyness.

thriveni c mysore

January 2, 2025 at 5:41 PM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Some drastic changes in climate- not a good sign though. Blessings & best wishes.

Kim Rodrigues

January 2, 2025 at 6:12 AM

Sipping air, fluffy white…ahh! We are hoping for snow here. Congrats and warm hugs.

thriveni c mysore

January 2, 2025 at 5:37 PM

Thank you dear poet for the kind visit. means so much to me, Blessings & hugs.

Andrea Dietrich

January 1, 2025 at 9:16 PM

A very interesting way to describe it. I had to look up the number of ice sheets to be sure it was true. I never even knew that. Congrats in my contest.

thriveni c mysore

January 1, 2025 at 11:38 PM

Thank you very much for your contest and precious time dear poet. I am grateful to you for the placement as it is the first contest result in 2025, makes me happier too. I am glad you liked it. Thank you dear poet.

Jan Allison

December 30, 2024 at 10:49 AM

what a lovely way to describe the formation of snow Thriveni:-) I like to see it on Christmas cards but not in real life lol:-) hugs Jan xx

thriveni c mysore

December 30, 2024 at 7:00 PM

I am thankful to you for this pleasant visit dear poet. Yes, it looks prettier on cards. Yet, they are timely indicators of global warming - a siren no one is listening to. Happy holidays dear poet, New year blessings & best wishes.

John Read

December 30, 2024 at 8:44 AM

Hi thriveni, I do love to see the snow falling, sadly it no longer seems to happen in London anymore, sending you my best wishes for the new year.

thriveni c mysore

December 30, 2024 at 6:57 PM

Your kind visit brings me joy this day dear poet. I didn't know that about London. It shows where we are headed to I guess. Thank you for the blessings dear poet. Happy New Year, Happy writing.

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