Home » Poems » Sara Kendrick » snow

Sara Kendrick | + Follow Poet |

snow

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sara Kendrick.

Image result for pictures of a sky with snow clouds No snow here.

 snow clouds hang
 against the yellowed lawn....
red camellia blooms

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/2/2024 2:27:00 AM

Good thing we had a marvellous temperature here. Wishing you a happy New Year.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2024 3:36:00 AM

Awesome, Victor, that your area was nice as far as the weather goes. I think in your area it stays kind of even tempered or does it. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/1/2024 5:30:00 PM

A brilliant haiku, my friend. Such magnificent imagery. The contrast of colors takes my breath away.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2024 3:35:00 AM

Why, thank you, Jerry. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 12/31/2023 10:02:00 PM

Such a nice haiku ! We don't have either snow or camellia blooms ! Have a New Year of health, happiness and peace dear Sara.

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/31/2023 11:55:00 AM

OMGosh, Sara. I gave my gardener three weeks off. He has a whole week left mayhaps I'll trouble him for a short detour from Bismarck. I'm sure his walk of a block of that town would end his silent torture, alas, what one must bear yon or within familial ties. What sorts would entertain an aloof soul such as I? Occasions an eve of eves--'twill be, Cheers, 2024, my dear friend. Aloha, William

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/31/2023 2:14:00 PM

Hilo, Thanks for the unusual comments placed here. Yes, this eve ends this year and when one second past midnight starts another year. All fresh and new for our enjoyment, dedication, starting a new with on new page, or creating a whole new life to live for the rest of our lives. I don't make New Year resolutions because what I would want to do mostly I can't so I just keep on keeping on. LOL..Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/30/2023 10:02:00 PM

Thankfully none here either but there's still time I suppose Spring can't come quick enough. Happy New year to you Sara. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/31/2023 7:49:00 AM

Yes, Tom, there are plenty of winter days ahead of us. One year we had a blizzard here in March. I have never ever faced a blizzard in my life up until that time and not been in one since, but it could always happen again. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/30/2023 3:56:00 PM

Sounds like you live in a temperate climate. Better having clouds with snow only and letting it sit aloft. Thanks for this one. I got to look up camellias and see what they're all about. The limits of my experience constantly show up, but it's an opportunity for a little exploration. Much appreciated!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/31/2023 7:48:00 AM

Duke, Well, ice or sleet could be even worse than the snow. I am glad that you was able to find out about Camellias. I don't know if they won't work for some zones in the world but I would think that they might not be able to thrive in some places. Thanks for the visit and taking time to comment. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 12/30/2023 1:30:00 PM

What a brilliant and artistic way to describe those heavy clouds, we’ve had it all day and even now too. Seems like the whole world is seeing changes in season and nature lately. Here in the maldives we had three earthquakes yesterday and its been stormy too, a little too much. Ans i am not a fan of those heavy clouds. But your haiku makes them look and sound so poetic and beautiful! Loved it, pleasure reading you always, sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/31/2023 7:45:00 AM

Why, thank you, IE. Yes, a really cloudy day can get a person's happy place going downhill. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2023 10:22:00 AM

No snow here either. This is so pretty

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/30/2023 11:18:00 AM

I would think that you probably are glad no snow. Thanks for the compliment, Andrea. I appreciate your visits. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/30/2023 8:47:00 AM

Oh my, red camellia and yellowed lawn.. This is absolutely beautiful, dear Sara.. Such an elegant haiku that captures an ethereal image within just a click of few words, so mesmeric, profound and enchanting! "Snow clouds hang" Love this so much too.. What a sublime haiku.. As always! Really enjoyed reading this, sending you light and love :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/30/2023 11:17:00 AM

Hiya, I am glad that those snow clouds have dissipated this afternoon. They had me concerned. Thanks for the visit and taking time to comment. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 12/30/2023 6:55:00 AM

No snow here either but very windy and wet... vivid imagery in your poem Sara... red camellia blooms really brings it to life..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/30/2023 11:16:00 AM

SO, I am glad that I put that camellia in there. Thanks for the nice review. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 12/30/2023 5:40:00 AM

Sara, I love how your Haiku brings out such a visual and peaceful winter setting. Haikus are some of my most favorite and this is a fav for me. Happy New Year, Sara! Blessings, Daniel!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/30/2023 11:15:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel, for the honor of this one being on your fav's list. I am glad you liked it. Sara K