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Snow

Snow fell on the deck
             All coated in white
             The grass is still green
              It's cold outside

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/22/2024 9:18:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/23/2024 10:05:00 AM

Hello Agustin Beata, I like this message from the bible. thank you. Thank you so much for the bible quote. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Peter Dome

Date: 3/13/2024 8:12:00 PM

Bravo, short but so sweet. You must be a genius. Cleverly crafted. So visual. Well done. Love it. Pete.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/14/2024 11:30:00 AM

Hello Pete., thank you for the lovely comment. I hope you are having a great day. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 1/11/2024 12:28:00 PM

"All coated in white..." Darlene, this is fantastic haiku moment. Thanks for visiting, and do keep up the good work.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/12/2024 11:09:00 AM

Hello Iris Lewis, so nice to meet you. Thank you. I will. enjoy your day my friend./ Darlene/

Joseph May

Date: 1/6/2024 10:48:00 AM

Nice imagery of a snowy day, best wishes

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/8/2024 11:09:00 AM

Hello Joseph , thank you for the lovely comment. Happy New Year. Wishing the best for the new year.. /Darlene/

Deb M

Date: 1/3/2024 1:34:00 PM

White snow and green grass….a beautiful combination! Lovely poem….Debx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/3/2024 2:54:00 PM

Hello Deb M. yes these colors look beautiful together. Thank you for the love.ly comments. Hugs. /Darlene/

Len Gasun

Date: 12/25/2023 11:31:00 PM

A gorgeous verse my dear poet friend Darlene. I love the image here and since there's no snow here and never snow, thank you so much for the vicarious experience your awesome poem had brought to me. Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/26/2023 10:43:00 AM

Hello Len, iT is now the day after Christmas, with the green like yesterday. It is raining. You are lucky not to have the snow. Hugs. & Blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/22/2023 12:20:00 PM

What a creative/fun write. It is getting cold outside. I love the snow as long as I do not need to shovel it. Have a great day writing away............

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/26/2023 10:38:00 AM

Hello Paula, My Christmas was a green one,It could snow only on the grass. Leaving the sidewalks and roads clear. How was hyour Christmas? hugs. /Darlene/

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 12/18/2023 4:33:00 AM

Hello Darlene,a beautiful description of nature!! Have a blessed day!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/19/2023 8:00:00 AM

Hello Mulu, Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/15/2023 7:47:00 AM

Darlene, Such a beautiful tribute to the beauty of nature! Happy Friday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/15/2023 2:45:00 PM

Hello Mike, thank you Mike. Happy Friday. Merry Christmas. Darlene/ xxxxxxoo

Bill Baker

Date: 12/14/2023 5:29:00 PM

Nice imagery, my friend. I can feel the chill. You poet pal in Texas, Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/15/2023 2:43:00 PM

hello Bill, the warm air came in then the warm air came in to melt the snow. Wishing you my poet friend. A mewrry Christmas. /Darlene/

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/14/2023 4:54:00 PM

Freat description. I only have memories of snow.. and that’s good enough for me. Pangie

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/15/2023 2:40:00 PM

Hello Panagikota, Well the snow that was only on the deck, has melted. Itis fall again. Hugs. /Darlene/xxx

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 12/13/2023 1:18:00 PM

Hello Darlene. Nice you have the snow. The winter is near. Nice poem my friend. Have a nice eveningxxxx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/13/2023 4:41:00 PM

Hello Maria, The snow that was only Thank you for the love.ly comment. on the deck melte3d. There was no snow on the grass. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Jim Slaughter

Date: 12/12/2023 1:49:00 PM

I hope I'll see some snow this winter. So far, only sunny days. Cold...but sunny.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/13/2023 4:39:00 PM

Hello Jim, I hope yhou get the snow. En joy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/11/2023 9:13:00 PM

Brrr I can feel the winter chill Darlene, stay inside and keep warm. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/12/2023 6:12:00 AM

Hello Tom, I will stay insidxe and keep warm. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene/

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/11/2023 6:35:00 PM

Sounds too cold for me Darlene. Loved the imagery of white on green. Still a promise of better days to come.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/12/2023 6:14:00 AM

Hello jerry, Oh yes better days are coming. I rather havew thew snow on the grass then on the whole ground. Enjoy your dayu my friend. /Darlene/

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/11/2023 5:00:00 PM

Don't slip and fall! Makes me cold just reading it, Darlene. I like it:)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/12/2023 6:18:00 AM

Hello Daniel, I do not go out side in the backyard in the winter. I am very careful in the winter. I will try not top fall. My friend. enjoy your day. /Darlene/