Snow

magical white stuff showing us winter slipping and sliding land on eyelashes swirling and twirling hanker to make an ice igloo snowballs waiting snowman ready glistening glittery wonderful pretty whiteness snow

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2019 6:40:00 PM

that is a very lovely poem in that form, Caren. Just like Iowa. I sure remember its snow.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/6/2019 7:07:00 PM

We had snow in Kansas last week.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/6/2019 6:26:00 PM

Beautiful image, my friend. Soothing to read.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/6/2019 7:08:00 PM

I thought to myself "what would go well with a diminished hexaverse?" and it pretty much wrote itself.

Ann Foster

Date: 11/6/2019 5:55:00 PM

snowman ready... my favorite line... I love snowmen... hehe... wonderful fun write. Have a truly great day. Ann

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/6/2019 7:08:00 PM

I love snowmen, snow forts, snow women, snow dogs, need I go on?

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/6/2019 8:01:00 AM

Wondrous!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/6/2019 12:22:00 PM

I do love it.