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tiny snow angel snowflakes kiss your rosy cheeks white winter beauty Any poem you ever wrote not for a contest Sponsored by Broken Wings 14th November 2014 Published in Haiku Journal #33 by Prolific Press

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Date: 2/14/2019 6:33:00 PM
Snow flakes are like angels ~ I love it! Beautiful haiku Jan :)
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Date: 2/14/2019 6:35:00 PM
thanks PM:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/25/2019 8:37:00 AM
Very nicely written!
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Date: 2/14/2019 6:34:00 PM
thanks Valerie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/14/2016 9:04:00 PM
An excellent write, Jan! Your words match the picture perfectly. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/9/2017 7:44:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim sorry I missed replying before!:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/14/2016 5:17:00 PM
Great Haiku Jan. I used to make snow devils....
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Date: 7/14/2016 5:21:00 PM
ha ha ha John I love that comment:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/14/2016 9:42:00 AM
I really LOVED that picture to go with it. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 7/14/2016 5:20:00 PM
Thanks Carol I love the picture too:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/13/2016 2:12:00 PM
Congratulations, Jan
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Date: 7/13/2016 3:11:00 PM
Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/24/2014 9:37:00 AM
Nice poem. Excellent share and you gave me an inspiring read. Thanks for blessing us with your creativity.
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Date: 11/24/2014 11:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Funom:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/23/2014 4:36:00 AM
Nice haiku, Jan
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Date: 11/23/2014 4:38:00 AM
thanks so much for the comment S D :-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/17/2014 5:09:00 PM
I find this piece, extremely romantic. It's the scene I'd like to be in, with someone so close. Love it Jan, dreamy Haiku, James :)
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Date: 11/17/2014 5:11:00 PM
Thank you so much James for your glowing comment:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/17/2014 4:11:00 PM
I think all your poetry is brilliant. Your Haiku goes one step beyond that. Fav.
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Date: 11/17/2014 4:15:00 PM
Aww Maurice you are so so generous in your praise thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/16/2014 7:31:00 PM
You stuck to the 5 7 5 form which is all to the good! I enjoyed your winter haiku! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/17/2014 1:01:00 AM
Thanks so much Matthew:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/16/2014 8:16:00 AM
I can feel the cold kiss of snow on my cheeks. A delightful Haiku, Jan. A 7 and a sav for me. And thanks for visiting my poem this morning. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 11/16/2014 8:56:00 AM
Thanks so much Darlene:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/15/2014 12:49:00 PM
- Lovely snow haiku Jan !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/15/2014 12:59:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 11/15/2014 12:24:00 PM
I love the imagery of this piece, it brought back memories for this reader indeed. So much beauty expressed within this haiku. Thank you for sharing the read and for your lovely comments on "Welcome Back Child". God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 11/15/2014 12:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Adell:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/15/2014 5:50:00 AM
A snowy day?...Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the visit..I would like chocolate in my chili I am sure but don't know about the rest of the family..Cinnamon just a dash adds to the flavor as well..Sara
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Date: 11/15/2014 6:32:00 AM
thanks for dropping by Sara - you cant actually taste the chocolate in the chilli - just gives it a dark richness to it:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 11/14/2014 11:40:00 PM
Winter personified-snow-white-great imagery..A fav XXXX Love Jan XXX RAJAT
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Date: 11/15/2014 3:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/14/2014 11:28:00 PM
Very lovely! Enjoyed your haiku Jan. I could almost see your tiny Angels in front of me while reading it. A 7 for me! :) love and light! xxx D.
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Date: 11/15/2014 3:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Dorian:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/14/2014 6:30:00 PM
Such a pretty picture you have brush stroked on my mind.
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Date: 11/14/2014 6:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely comment Richard:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/14/2014 5:56:00 PM
You have captured the pretty side of winter with your Haiku..my homestate gets plenty of snow..the state I live in now they call sunshine state
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Date: 11/14/2014 6:09:00 PM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Frederic:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/14/2014 4:49:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Jan. I can only imagine...we do not get snow in Malta. hugs // paul
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Date: 11/14/2014 4:53:00 PM
Thankfully we rarely get it Paul - it is lovely on Christmas cards but the reality of the chaos it can cause was found in the Island in 2012 when in the North they had an unusual amount - drifts of up to 10 foot any many livestock sadly perished:-( Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/14/2014 3:59:00 PM
Im going to make my first snow angel with Christina in kent(Rochester or Canterbury)..Is there snow at the moment?How beautiful this is Favouring if.I just told a friend he should try get his haiku published.I believe this can make irt too. If you ll be interested the email is www.haikujournal.com or .org ..There is a site profilic press..you can get more info..Hugs..Tmfvs
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Date: 11/14/2014 4:02:00 PM
Thanks Chramaine I was thinking of posting some when you mentioned it before - maybe its time now:-) Hugs Jan No snow forecast for the next 2 weeks there as far as the long range forecast shows - sorry:-(
Date: 11/14/2014 3:09:00 PM
Mine ran in off the school bus in shorts...snow, cold, kids and fashion....excellent Jan...hugs Tim
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Date: 11/14/2014 3:15:00 PM
No not in public schools
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Date: 11/14/2014 3:14:00 PM
LOL - kids eh - Don't they have school uniform in the schools then? Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/14/2014 2:49:00 PM
Yes, yes . . . I like this a lot . . . little children with bright red cheeks and squeals of delightful laughter -- snow everywhere . . . a warm happiness is this haiku. Nicely done
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Date: 11/14/2014 2:57:00 PM
Thanks David for the lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/14/2014 1:42:00 PM
Most Beautiful Jan!! The imagery is wondrous and most delightful. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 11/14/2014 1:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Gary:-) I have just commented on your poem! Hugs Jan xx