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A man made of snow Some kids gave him candle and wick Turned to H2O Snowflakes dance and wave Like my Christmas memories Unique but soon gone Frosty wind made moan And earth stood as hard as steel… Snow on snow on snow. Advice is like snow Falls softer but dwells longer Sinks deeper in mind Snowflakes fragile things But just look what they can do When they stick together. Fifty two snow names Important for Eskimo As many for love. ======================== First place winner in: Contest: Snow Haiku sponsored Irma, SKAT

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Date: 5/23/2015 11:03:00 AM
AWESOME
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Date: 4/10/2014 9:49:00 PM
Dr. Ram Such a creative and cute snow themed write. Thank you for the nice comment on my Bitter Tears poem.
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Date: 12/17/2010 2:22:00 PM
Was just reading some winners and this one was terrific.A well deserved 1st place win.Your friend Teresa
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Date: 12/13/2010 1:37:00 PM
Totally loved all the haikus; especially the one that you compare snow to advice. Very nice and extremely creative. Congratulations on your first place finish!
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Date: 12/8/2010 11:50:00 AM
A hearty congratulations to you on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/7/2010 1:16:00 PM
I really enjoyed these witty Haikus of yours Dr. Ram:, awesome!Into my favs they go! A hearty congratulations to you on a well deserved win
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Date: 12/5/2010 10:49:00 AM
wonderful poem Dr. Ram, congrats on your win
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Date: 12/5/2010 6:16:00 AM
king-sized conrats on this piqaunt piece and thanks for greetings on minr, dr. mehta! nette
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Date: 12/4/2010 4:54:00 AM
Big congrats on your second place in the contest.
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Date: 12/3/2010 7:24:00 PM
Loved your haiku, especially the last one. Well done.
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Date: 12/3/2010 8:40:00 AM
This one deserved first place in the contest, Ram! Thanks for your comment on Haiku1, always appreciated:) Carol
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Date: 12/3/2010 3:05:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win, Dr. Ram! Wonderful entry! Hugs, Emilia:)
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Date: 12/2/2010 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 12/2/2010 3:16:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Poet.....well done my friend...
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Date: 12/2/2010 2:47:00 PM
A winner and a keeper. Verse 4 is superb! Congratulations to you, well done! Regards, Gerard
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations Dr Ram on your first place, My friend. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:17:00 AM
Impressive write, Dr. Ram and congratulations on your 1st place winning on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/2/2010 7:49:00 AM
These are a terrific set, lovely, enjoyed them, congrats on you win!
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Date: 12/2/2010 7:35:00 AM
A unique look at snow, and a wonderful collectiion of poems in this contest...well done, Dr. Ram!!!! Congratulations on your win! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/2/2010 7:22:00 AM
Dr. Ram ) Congratulations again! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.
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Date: 12/2/2010 6:34:00 AM
Many congratulations dear Dr. Mehta for this awsome piece.
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:55:00 AM
Great job Dr. Ram, congrats! Blessings, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 12/2/2010 4:57:00 AM
excellent enjoyed all of these. congrats on your number1. Harry
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Date: 12/2/2010 4:20:00 AM
Dr. Ram congratulations on your first place win in Irma's contest ;) Wilma
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Date: 12/2/2010 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations dear Dr. Ram on your 1st Place win in Irma's contest. Keep pumping them out there my friend. Love, Carol
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