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Snipped Strings and a Long Journey Home

In the summer, when our cracked spines split like melons in the heat we reached toward the unattainable sun, unbearable dreams. You kissed me, hard, under the midnight moon like no regrets, Our dangling cigarettes tainted the air. Shivering smoke may have combined with your skin-scented cocoa until the lines and boundaries between love and insanity were blurred (by sweet silver vapor, by the weight of our snipped strings our cracked souls our silent songs). You kissed me, hard, like no regrets, like the craziness that consumes us all, like a long journey home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/12/2011 4:27:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Carly. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2011 6:43:00 PM
Very beautiful write! Loved each thought you put into this splendid piece from the begining line to the end!
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Carly Schmidt
Date: 7/11/2011 7:07:00 PM
Wow! Thank you so much!

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