Snickers

he lived across the street with a crumbly yard
full of half dead trees with an orchard

broken wooden picket fence showd me decay
his child hood that'd been given away
an old giant half t'horn away overgrown hedge  
the dirt paths around the house with cans they threw away
downhill by the truck to the back porch I ran
looking for friends  

I ran up the stairs deadpan
what are you looking at 
I said to 3 teenagers again

on the tiny tv their uncle's vcr was playing love songs
they looked at me grinned at me and said sit down
I watched amazingly at the smallest tv I'd ever seen

it only took a minute before they asked me what I thought of it
I didn't know I wonderd too and wondered what they meant
they said why dont we try and off we went 
into a bedroom

me 3 boys and a nasty bed, his, they asked me to blow them
I reffused, unsure and sscared with discontent
they offerd me a snickers bar and i said "yes"
sucked one , they snickerd, touched another
and they snickerd
I fell over the bed my pants went down 
and they snickered 
now I look over the bed staring at myself looking forward 
with one young man behind me 
two beside me snickering 
one humping me over a dirty bed 
over a snickers bar.

I run crying pulling my undies up and run for home with them snickering after me
dad must not have been home because he never asked about it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/24/2019 10:39:00 AM
@ Phil Capitano this is about being molested, part of a series of trauma related poems I write as a component of my therapy. Sorry it surprised you.
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Date: 4/24/2019 4:04:00 AM
Caught me off guard with this one, the ending and the bj's; a little too randy for my taste in poetry but its a new world out there and anything goes. Have a great day.
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