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Sneezing Socks

SNEEZING SOCKS
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With petite purple pansies in her long and luscious locks 
Carly cleaned , creased , and darned her dirty, smelly socks,
Her clover colored dress twirled around her fancy feet
As apple –printed apron looked goody good enough to eat,
With newly laundered laundry, billowing brightly in the breeze
Oh, stray seeds from Carly’s socks, made her suddenly  sneeze.


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John Freeman’s Contest: Alliteration Poems, Please

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2011

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Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/13/2011 9:10:00 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, nette Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 9/12/2011 8:58:00 PM as good as they come Nette. well done and congrats to you ! Login to Reply

Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 9/12/2011 6:11:00 PM Congratulations on your awesome win with this Alliteration!!!Lori Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/12/2011 3:16:00 PM Congrats on this winning work.I knew that it was a winner...Sara Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 9/12/2011 12:11:00 PM Congrats on your 1st place win, Nette! Kim Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 9/12/2011 10:20:00 AM What a lovely picture you have painted with this one....(I can see her hanging laundry in the breeze!) Pretty in her clover covered dress! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/12/2011 8:31:00 AM Congratulations on your top win In Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Nette. Love, Carol Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 9/12/2011 6:29:00 AM I have the most senitive nose I believe Nette. I will sneeze at the slightest difference in smell. Congratulations on your first place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 9/12/2011 3:53:00 AM Nette congrats on your win..David Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 9/12/2011 1:15:00 AM Grat alliteration nette and congratulations on your win. Joyce Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/12/2011 1:05:00 AM Congrats Nette luv on first place win with this great Alliteration poetry my friend.. luv the wit and u too.. Login to Reply

Johnny Sumler Date: 9/11/2011 4:57:00 AM Such a splendid write Nette! You've painted pictures with this colorful form. Alliteration is the secret ingredient in most of my poetry, as I am fascinated with play-on words...they paint such a beautiful picture, as you have done here. Apologies for the contest and getting your soupmail late...guess im headed for soup jail 4 breakin da rulez : ) Hopefully next time I'll do a better job, for you all are the best at ispiring minds with your poetic contest themes! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/9/2011 10:26:00 PM It reads wonderfully and creates a very cute picture of this cute Carly hanging her laundry! Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 9/9/2011 5:04:00 PM Just great Nette, the smelly socks are just a by product of all the other wonderful things you say here. I wish you success in the contest. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/9/2011 4:16:00 PM Hi there, I won't have time to revise.. Will just remove from contest ;) no worries Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 9/9/2011 4:08:00 PM What a magnificent write you have written nette! Great work of art! I love how you had more than one letter with multiple words - like the first line you have 3 p started words, AND had 3 l started words...awesome!! Great work!! You'll do well in the contest I know!! Login to Reply

Richard Pickett Date: 9/9/2011 3:21:00 PM I can smell them from here Nette, Nicely written, should do well in Moses contest. God Bless....Taz Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/9/2011 2:25:00 PM Got a chuckle..Enjoyed..Good luck in John's contest..Your entry reads like winning material to me..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 9/9/2011 12:44:00 PM Revisiting this one...please visit my "Foreplay" Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/9/2011 11:50:00 AM Soup Mail!! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/9/2011 10:41:00 AM oh Nette luv this is so adorably cute my friend.. best wishes in John's contest.. cute story line and clever use of Alliteration form.. as always super creative... just read your neat blog.. hope I did it OK ..luv.. thankxx... Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 9/9/2011 10:04:00 AM LOL, witty piece, Nette : ) Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 9/9/2011 9:30:00 AM I enjoyed your poem, Nette. Good luck in the contest. Kim Login to Reply

Nick Bagnall Date: 9/9/2011 7:32:00 AM Thanks for your kind comments on "Five Funny Faries". This is a lovely balanced alliterative poem, you've got a good flow in there and a nice story - good luck. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/9/2011 7:27:00 AM Soup Mail! Login to Reply

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