Nette Onclaud Poet Alliteration

Sneezing Socks

SNEEZING SOCKS
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With petite purple pansies in her long and luscious locks 
Carly cleaned , creased , and darned her dirty, smelly socks,
Her clover colored dress twirled around her fancy feet
As apple –printed apron looked goody good enough to eat,
With newly laundered laundry, billowing brightly in the breeze
Oh, stray seeds from Carly’s socks, made her suddenly  sneeze.


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John Freeman’s Contest: Alliteration Poems, Please

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Dr.Ram Mehta September 13, 2011 at 9:10 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, nette

Robert A. Dufresne September 12, 2011 at 8:58 PM as good as they come Nette. well done and congrats to you !

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 12, 2011 at 6:11 PM Congratulations on your awesome win with this Alliteration!!!Lori

Sara Kendrick September 12, 2011 at 3:16 PM Congrats on this winning work.I knew that it was a winner...Sara

Kim Merryman September 12, 2011 at 12:11 PM Congrats on your 1st place win, Nette! Kim

Carrie Richards September 12, 2011 at 10:20 AM What a lovely picture you have painted with this one....(I can see her hanging laundry in the breeze!) Pretty in her clover covered dress!

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 8:31 AM Congratulations on your top win In Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Nette. Love, Carol

John Freeman September 12, 2011 at 6:29 AM I have the most senitive nose I believe Nette. I will sneeze at the slightest difference in smell. Congratulations on your first place. Agape, Moses

David Williams September 12, 2011 at 3:53 AM Nette congrats on your win..David

Joyce Johnson September 12, 2011 at 1:15 AM Grat alliteration nette and congratulations on your win. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 12, 2011 at 1:05 AM Congrats Nette luv on first place win with this great Alliteration poetry my friend.. luv the wit and u too..

Johnny Sumler September 11, 2011 at 4:57 AM Such a splendid write Nette! You've painted pictures with this colorful form. Alliteration is the secret ingredient in most of my poetry, as I am fascinated with play-on words...they paint such a beautiful picture, as you have done here. Apologies for the contest and getting your soupmail late...guess im headed for soup jail 4 breakin da rulez : ) Hopefully next time I'll do a better job, for you all are the best at ispiring minds with your poetic contest themes!

Andrea Dietrich September 9, 2011 at 10:26 PM It reads wonderfully and creates a very cute picture of this cute Carly hanging her laundry!

Elizabeth Wesley September 9, 2011 at 5:04 PM Just great Nette, the smelly socks are just a by product of all the other wonderful things you say here. I wish you success in the contest.

Wilma Neels September 9, 2011 at 4:16 PM Hi there, I won't have time to revise.. Will just remove from contest ;) no worries

Russell Sivey September 9, 2011 at 4:08 PM What a magnificent write you have written nette! Great work of art! I love how you had more than one letter with multiple words - like the first line you have 3 p started words, AND had 3 l started words...awesome!! Great work!! You'll do well in the contest I know!!

Richard Pickett September 9, 2011 at 3:21 PM I can smell them from here Nette, Nicely written, should do well in Moses contest. God Bless....Taz

Sara Kendrick September 9, 2011 at 2:25 PM Got a chuckle..Enjoyed..Good luck in John's contest..Your entry reads like winning material to me..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Kash Poet September 9, 2011 at 12:44 PM Revisiting this one...please visit my "Foreplay"

Dr.Ram Mehta September 9, 2011 at 11:50 AM Soup Mail!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 9, 2011 at 10:41 AM oh Nette luv this is so adorably cute my friend.. best wishes in John's contest.. cute story line and clever use of Alliteration form.. as always super creative... just read your neat blog.. hope I did it OK ..luv.. thankxx...

Jack Horne September 9, 2011 at 10:04 AM LOL, witty piece, Nette : )

Kim Merryman September 9, 2011 at 9:30 AM I enjoyed your poem, Nette. Good luck in the contest. Kim

Nick Bagnall September 9, 2011 at 7:32 AM Thanks for your kind comments on "Five Funny Faries". This is a lovely balanced alliterative poem, you've got a good flow in there and a nice story - good luck.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 9, 2011 at 7:27 AM Soup Mail!

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