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Sneaky Humidity

“All dressed to kill; please don’t let it rain!” Hours spent with flat iron Straightening out the curls Here comes sneaky humidity to undo this “do” ~*~

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/27/2011 6:36:00 AM

I remember this! Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/16/2011 6:02:00 PM

I have this straight hair that the humidity will make it flat.

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/14/2011 2:24:00 PM

a nice light piece Annalise, enjoyed this greatly.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/14/2011 6:01:00 AM

Awesome and witty write, Annalise! Hope you entered it in the "Bad Hair Contest"! Have a great weekend!...Gert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/13/2011 2:01:00 PM

funny, just don't fight what the good lord gave you. let em bounce!

Michael Gelb

Date: 1/13/2011 9:58:00 AM

Nice poem. Thank you for commenting to my poem.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/13/2011 6:03:00 AM

enjoyed this awesome poem, Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/13/2011 5:12:00 AM

Hope all is going well for u luv.. another sneak peek at the sneaky humidity .. awesome...

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 1/13/2011 1:50:00 AM

A perfect picture story you tell in short verse, well done!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/13/2011 12:10:00 AM

what a bummer, lol.. i too need to straighten my hair and this can be excruciating, audrey.. witty, witty piece that is a great entry to the contest.. thanks for dropping by; enjoyed!! till next!:) nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/12/2011 8:22:00 PM

In high school I was the only cheerleader whose hair didn't frizz in the humidity, Dimples. They whined about it all the time, but straight hair was never what I wanted. Very funny entry for the contest! Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle, dear. Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/12/2011 6:23:00 PM

Bet you look fine..with an " up" do, or a "down" do..this made me laugh. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2011 6:04:00 PM

'VERY good one because I can relate to it the times I curled my hair and lost the whole "do" to dang humidity or rain. So you are my old friend Audrey, right? Where did you come up with THIS name? and what happened to make you upset when you blogged the other day? soupmail me if you have time. Luv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/12/2011 5:46:00 PM

well now here's another form I know nothing of! I'll have to check it out. You keep me learning Audrey. The women I know with curls straighten them and the ones without try and get them... I don't get it........ I'm thinking any kind of hair would be nice! heh heh. Good luck with undoing the do...'.and keep on doing what's gotta be did, Audrey.... thanks for your comments

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/12/2011 5:19:00 PM

To undo this do... what a spicy expressions, Annalise. Good luck in the contest

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/12/2011 5:09:00 PM

Well my hair is something I don't have to worry about too much. However, you have described everything here quite well.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/12/2011 4:07:00 PM

Really cool picture in words Annalise and good luck in the contest.. can relate to every line..luv..