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Sneaky Humidity

“All dressed to kill; please don’t let it rain!”
Hours spent with flat iron
Straightening out the curls
Here comes sneaky humidity to undo this “do”

~*~

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Debbie Guzzi

January 27, 2011 at 6:36 AM

I remember this! Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse

January 16, 2011 at 6:02 PM

I have this straight hair that the humidity will make it flat.

Joe Maverick

January 14, 2011 at 2:24 PM

a nice light piece Annalise, enjoyed this greatly.

Gert W. Knop

January 14, 2011 at 6:01 AM

Awesome and witty write, Annalise! Hope you entered it in the "Bad Hair Contest"! Have a great weekend!...Gert

Doris Culverhouse

January 13, 2011 at 2:01 PM

funny, just don't fight what the good lord gave you. let em bounce!

Michael Gelb

January 13, 2011 at 9:58 AM

Nice poem. Thank you for commenting to my poem.

Harry Horsman

January 13, 2011 at 6:03 AM

enjoyed this awesome poem, Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 13, 2011 at 5:12 AM

Hope all is going well for u luv.. another sneak peek at the sneaky humidity .. awesome...

Anna-Marie Docherty

January 13, 2011 at 1:50 AM

A perfect picture story you tell in short verse, well done!

Nette Onclaud

January 13, 2011 at 12:10 AM

what a bummer, lol.. i too need to straighten my hair and this can be excruciating, audrey.. witty, witty piece that is a great entry to the contest.. thanks for dropping by; enjoyed!! till next!:) nette

Carolyn Devonshire

January 12, 2011 at 8:22 PM

In high school I was the only cheerleader whose hair didn't frizz in the humidity, Dimples. They whined about it all the time, but straight hair was never what I wanted. Very funny entry for the contest! Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle, dear. Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

January 12, 2011 at 6:23 PM

Bet you look fine..with an " up" do, or a "down" do..this made me laugh. BG

Andrea Dietrich

January 12, 2011 at 6:04 PM

'VERY good one because I can relate to it the times I curled my hair and lost the whole "do" to dang humidity or rain. So you are my old friend Audrey, right? Where did you come up with THIS name? and what happened to make you upset when you blogged the other day? soupmail me if you have time. Luv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

January 12, 2011 at 5:46 PM

well now here's another form I know nothing of! I'll have to check it out. You keep me learning Audrey. The women I know with curls straighten them and the ones without try and get them... I don't get it........ I'm thinking any kind of hair would be nice! heh heh. Good luck with undoing the do...'.and keep on doing what's gotta be did, Audrey.... thanks for your comments