Snapshot of My Life

I think my best years are clearly already behind me That everyone persists in reminding me, it is glee. I don’t think my traumatic childhood years were elective That’s certainly true from my adulthood perspective. I won't consider sharing those god-awful teenage years They were replete with so much trauma, agony, and tears. I remember best my first year in college, Berea They, most of my buddies, went to Korea! I loved being stationed in our newest state, Hawaii The U.S.A.F. took me; I soon became a beach flea. I returned to wild and wonderful West Virginia The rest of my story there, some day, I shall continue. I think life began when I met sweet Deborah, my wife, That should suffice, I think, for a quickie look at my life!
THIRD PLACE WINNER Written August 15, 2022 submitted to "Dot Your i's and Cross your t's" poetry contest sponsored by Hilo Poet [14 lines of 14 syllables per line checked with PS Syllable Counter]

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Date: 10/1/2022 6:00:00 PM
Back with huge congrats one your win Milt! Linda
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/1/2022 6:20:00 PM
Thanks so much, Linda. It was sort of unexpected, so I'm happy about it.
Date: 9/30/2022 8:31:00 PM
Beautiful autobiography written in shortusing I and T. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/1/2022 8:33:00 AM
Thanks so much, Chris.
Date: 9/30/2022 2:32:00 PM
Great title, I hope you will continue your precious story. Congratulations on your win Milt! ~Anaya
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Date: 10/1/2022 8:34:00 AM
Aw, how sweet. Perhaps I will...if the spirit strikes, Anaya. Thanks a bundle for your thoughtful words.
Date: 9/30/2022 2:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/30/2022 2:31:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Sara. I really appreciate this coming from you.
Date: 9/30/2022 10:13:00 AM
Milton, just remember: what we survive has made us stronger. I truly believe that. Congratulations on winning Third with a fine poem!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/30/2022 11:16:00 AM
Thank you, Ann. Yes, that's true. I went back and corrected all those small mistakes in the poem that I had overlooked. I need to practice what I preach!
Date: 9/30/2022 9:29:00 AM
Enjoyed the memorable romp of an endeared past, Milt, compliments truly on your placement my friend, Aloha William
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/30/2022 10:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for your contest and for my placement, William. It was delightful!
Date: 8/18/2022 11:11:00 AM
Perfect Milt! A brief glimpse so well-defined in this poem. GL in the contest! Linda
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/18/2022 11:46:00 AM
Linda, I appreciate your comment. Thank you so much.
Date: 8/16/2022 11:47:00 PM
"I loved being stationed in our newest state, Hawaii The U.S.A.F. took me; I soon became a beach flea." I love the way Hawaii and beach flea rhyme incredibly well! What a great snapshot of your life!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/17/2022 8:14:00 AM
Thanks so much, Caren. I'm going to write another one or two of these. It was fun. The only thing I didn't like was the syllable count (I never like that) but I'm going to write more without worrying about syllables!
Date: 8/16/2022 10:11:00 PM
The Good the Bad and the Ugly, not so Milton you still have many more great years ahead of you and they will all be good. Let us wish...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/17/2022 8:24:00 AM
Well, I can hope! It's an interesting journey, this life!
Date: 8/16/2022 7:10:00 PM
Not a fan of 'The Best is Yet to Come?!'
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/16/2022 7:12:00 PM
"Oh, won't it be fine!" My life in a nutshell, gw.
Date: 8/16/2022 5:53:00 AM
Milton, you have done a GREAT job of giving specific details of life while adhering to a challenging set of guidelines. Very expressive. Janice
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Date: 8/16/2022 8:26:00 AM
Thanks, Janice. I'm hopeful!
Date: 8/15/2022 10:51:00 PM
Milt at a glimpse! Well written, as are all your poems ~ good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/16/2022 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Unseeking Seeker. You are too kind, but I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 8/15/2022 7:54:00 PM
A crisp snapshot, well focused, developed, and framed. Really enjoyed! Robert
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Date: 8/15/2022 9:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert. I took the photo for a contest. It seemed to come out well.
Date: 8/15/2022 7:11:00 PM
Beautiful and touching poem, Milton. Good luck in the contest!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/15/2022 7:26:00 PM
Thanks, Marco. I appreciate your kind comment.
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