Snapshot of My Life

I think my best years are clearly already behind me That everyone persists in reminding me, it is glee. I don’t think my traumatic childhood years were elective That’s certainly true from my adulthood perspective. I won't consider sharing those god-awful teenage years They were replete with so much trauma, agony, and tears. I remember best my first year in college, Berea They, most of my buddies, went to Korea! I loved being stationed in our newest state, Hawaii The U.S.A.F. took me; I soon became a beach flea. I returned to wild and wonderful West Virginia The rest of my story there, some day, I shall continue. I think life began when I met sweet Deborah, my wife, That should suffice, I think, for a quickie look at my life!
THIRD PLACE WINNER Written August 15, 2022 submitted to "Dot Your i's and Cross your t's" poetry contest sponsored by Hilo Poet [14 lines of 14 syllables per line checked with PS Syllable Counter]
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Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 6:00 PM
Back with huge congrats one your win Milt! Linda
Hankins Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 6:20 PM
Thanks so much, Linda. It was sort of unexpected, so I'm happy about it.
Alex Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 8:31 PM
Beautiful autobiography written in shortusing I and T. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Thanks so much, Chris.
Anaya Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 2:32 PM
Great title, I hope you will continue your precious story. Congratulations on your win Milt! ~Anaya
Hankins Avatar
October 1, 2022 at 8:34 AM
Aw, how sweet. Perhaps I will...if the spirit strikes, Anaya. Thanks a bundle for your thoughtful words.
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 2:07 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
Hankins Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 2:31 PM
Thank you so very much, Sara. I really appreciate this coming from you.
Peck Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 10:13 AM
Milton, just remember: what we survive has made us stronger. I truly believe that. Congratulations on winning Third with a fine poem!
Hankins Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 11:16 AM
Thank you, Ann. Yes, that's true. I went back and corrected all those small mistakes in the poem that I had overlooked. I need to practice what I preach!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 9:29 AM
Enjoyed the memorable romp of an endeared past, Milt, compliments truly on your placement my friend, Aloha William
Hankins Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Thank you so much for your contest and for my placement, William. It was delightful!
Fowler Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 11:11 AM
Perfect Milt! A brief glimpse so well-defined in this poem. GL in the contest! Linda
Hankins Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Linda, I appreciate your comment. Thank you so much.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 11:47 PM
"I loved being stationed in our newest state, Hawaii The U.S.A.F. took me; I soon became a beach flea." I love the way Hawaii and beach flea rhyme incredibly well! What a great snapshot of your life!
Hankins Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 8:14 AM
Thanks so much, Caren. I'm going to write another one or two of these. It was fun. The only thing I didn't like was the syllable count (I never like that) but I'm going to write more without worrying about syllables!
Tor Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 10:11 PM
The Good the Bad and the Ugly, not so Milton you still have many more great years ahead of you and they will all be good. Let us wish...
Hankins Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Well, I can hope! It's an interesting journey, this life!
Wolf Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 7:10 PM
Not a fan of 'The Best is Yet to Come?!'
Hankins Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 7:12 PM
"Oh, won't it be fine!" My life in a nutshell, gw.
Canerdy Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 5:53 AM
Milton, you have done a GREAT job of giving specific details of life while adhering to a challenging set of guidelines. Very expressive. Janice
Hankins Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 8:26 AM
Thanks, Janice. I'm hopeful!
Seeker Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 10:51 PM
Milt at a glimpse! Well written, as are all your poems ~ good luck in the contest
Hankins Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 8:26 AM
Thank you so much, Unseeking Seeker. You are too kind, but I appreciate your kindness.
Gorelick Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 7:54 PM
A crisp snapshot, well focused, developed, and framed. Really enjoyed! Robert
Hankins Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 9:25 PM
Thank you so much, Robert. I took the photo for a contest. It seemed to come out well.
Chies Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 7:11 PM
Beautiful and touching poem, Milton. Good luck in the contest!
Hankins Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 7:26 PM
Thanks, Marco. I appreciate your kind comment.
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