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Snapping Branches

my desires
hang golden
like autumn’s leaves

dancing
on the edge
of dreams

snap of reality 
sends them crashing
back down 
grounded 

until
the next 
winded thought 
sends them adrift
again

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/25/2019 6:00:00 AM

Excellent, short and emotionally brush stroked with impact-feelings that resonated with me. I wish I could personally lift your thoughts despite admiring all your free verse. I want to hand you a bright, mesmerizing color of joy but I don't know how. Great poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/25/2019 10:53:00 AM

thank you so much my friend...your comment adds color :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/24/2019 9:41:00 PM

The way you've penned this, I actually heard a snap! This remarkable poem beckons the reader into its inner sanctum. Bravo! Best always, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/25/2019 5:04:00 AM

Thank you my friend ... then you heard what I heard that inspired this write :). Hugs

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/24/2019 4:33:00 PM

Very nice Sandy! Reality does crash down at times ! But hey until that next breeze comes along!;) enjoyed this!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/24/2019 6:57:00 PM

Thank you Brenda....i think we all have those hard landings at times....but somehow we always manage to get back up... :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/24/2019 3:44:00 PM

I have a thought...Swooooosh...that was a winded thought. Hope it helps send your dreams dancing again my friend. This was light, happy, smile producing poem. Never stop dreaming, never stop believing.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/24/2019 6:58:00 PM

lol, well thank you Chris....perhaps i will have to find a rock and attempt to write about it one day...i will always be a dreamer, it keeps me living...

Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 4:09:00 PM

It turned out beautifully Sandy. You could write a poem with a rock on a sidewalk and it would still be beautiful I would think.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/24/2019 4:07:00 PM

lol I was at a park and a branch came crashing down near me. It made for a poem though it was through my phone so not sure how it even turned out .... thanks Chris :)