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Smouldering Coals

SMOULDERING COALS The sound of logs lying in flames is the clicks of horsemen’s guns drawn back of a bullet prepared; Within soft light they dance silently to their own music of togetherness. Smouldering coals break free and away to continue their glowing conversation with the other breathing companions; Friends were few at first, but as time went by and hundreds hurled themselves to the crowd’s silence, they lived in the warmth of energy to survive and let survive those that hid from the night’s snows; They die to ashes, alone and loved… ©Mickey Van Tonder

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Date: 10/2/2017 2:21:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem,hope to see a new one from you again, Forever Seth
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:45:00 AM
Mickey Van Tonder, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 12:58:00 AM
Mickey, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/8/2014 12:28:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mickey - I choose your first very well written poem - Great ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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