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Smothered Black Rose

Black rose, your soul aerates an ebony, sweet calamus fragrance Paved over by concrete of regret ... unharvested time lost, never again to get Delicate black rose, a beautiful flower died in the field of Goshen Smothered by careless neglect ... We who have ailing loved ones, feel we have time enough yet to mend those fences that are broken But the petals fall to the ground when you least expect Plucked from the garden of life in her sleep peacefully ... her tired body set free, released from the bonds of her infirmities I loved you, even as I embraced your dying essence Fearlessly you faced the specter of death with grace and dignity I wished I had showed I loved you more, and told you as much People say how well I took care of you, but I feel like I didn't do enough But your forgiveness was more than enough It revived me, and set my guilt free Beautiful black rose, you were a loving mother to me; I remember well your tears of caring, shed so unselfishly Crying to God for the life of your children Though you were dying, you hid your pain from our eyes very well We never could tell the agony behind the smile, all the while, your flowering spirit dispersed seeds of love to the last gasp Timeless, blossoming black rose, the deep roots of your loving memory comforts me --- more than living hearts could ever know This poem is dedicated to my late beloved mother, Barbara

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/19/2017 5:17:00 AM
You wrote her such a beautiful tribute! I am sure she knew what was in your heart:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/14/2017 5:18:00 AM
such a heartfelt poem - one really feels the emotion in it - and good use of language to create vivid imagery; i can relate to your words...thank you for commenting on my work
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Date: 5/13/2017 9:11:00 AM
Your mother knew exactly how much you loved her. No words are needed for a mother to feel it in each and every little thing her children do for her. A smile, and time spent with her revealed to your mom what was in your heart.
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Date: 5/12/2017 7:23:00 PM
Awe, what a sweet memoriam for your mother. Beautifully hearttouching... I love it :)
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