Smoking

I'm an addict! I have been for years. Dying from it is one of my fears. The thing that I mostly hate, is feeling my health deteriorate. The nicotine stains and ashtray breath, bring me ever closer to death. On my death bed I'll probably say... Pass me my fags and an ashtray.

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Jenny Brewer

Date: 7/8/2017 10:47:00 AM

Thank you to all of you for commenting, I hope everyone is well. Just to let you all know..... I GAVE UP SMOKING...... I am now a non smoker.... Thank you,everyone.x

Skat A

Date: 8/17/2013 8:11:00 PM

Hi Jenny, congratulations.. in the Regret contest... SKAT

Hidden Sister

Date: 8/17/2013 3:15:00 AM

Such a truthful honest write. I have witness someone close do exactly this. He statement was what more can happen, I'm already dying, why quit now. But to me, someone left with out her, I thought why not quit back then. Congrats on your win.

Jenny Brewer
Date: 8/17/2013 3:46:00 PM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2013 10:35:00 PM

I sure hope you can give it up. My daughter in law just can't stop. Even carrying our grandson, she kept at it. I know it has to be terribly difficult to quit. This is a great poem. Congrats for your win.

Jenny Brewer
Date: 8/17/2013 3:45:00 PM

Thank you

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 8/3/2013 9:05:00 PM

Oh Jenny, smoking, shame on you LOL! Tell you what, whenever you feel the urge to light up, write a poem -afterwards you'll feel right as rain! ;) MC

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/1/2013 3:10:00 AM

dark humour and maybe its true, we will not bring cigarettes to our grave, nice to know who smokes and does not, don't look at me,i am only dust .

Russell Smith

Date: 7/26/2013 2:27:00 AM

Yes I do have a spot on my right lung. Well done