Smoking

Quit smoking, her son laments
as she takes a drag
from her
kingsize kents

You smoke too much, he cries
as tears fall down her face
from smoke blowing
into her eyes

You'll be sorry, he quips
as she swears while
her fingers slide down
the lit tip

That's the last pack, he demands
As the nicotine stains
disfigure her
hands

Some day soon I'll try
she says,
as her son frowns
with a sigh.



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Note:  In March I will have 3 years abstinent from smoking !!  This poem was 
written in the 1970's.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Gilliland Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 9:47 PM
Sadly gorgeous. And weirdly inspiring. This is one I'll think of for long time to come. Probably everytime I light up an sit down to write. Thank you for sharing.
Austin Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 8:37 AM
Yep! No one quits until they, themselves, are ready. Congrats on the selection. Love, Dave
Richards Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 12:32 PM
Such a honest portrayal Sue....you have accomplished something so many struggle and never can do! Hooray for you! ~ Love, Carrie
Adeite Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 11:17 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on Poetry Soup home page this week, you are such a great talent. Please keep your poetry pen dancing to the lyrics of your heart. Be great and enjoy the honor. Have a lovely week. Love, Adeleke
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July 14, 2010 at 11:04 AM
This poem feel so honest. Congratulations on on have your poem featured and for your victory over smoking. Enjoy both accomplishments. Keep on writing!!! Karen
Quintero Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 5:20 AM
Excellent! Thanks for sharing -Jodie Q
Sweetheart Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 8:11 PM
Congrats Sue on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a charmer to share with us all.. with luv..
Austin Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Congrats, Sue, on the selection, but especially on having quit smoking. Love, Dave
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sue. Love, Carol
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