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Quit smoking, her son laments as she takes a drag from her kingsize kents You smoke too much, he cries as tears fall down her face from smoke blowing into her eyes You'll be sorry, he quips as she swears while her fingers slide down the lit tip That's the last pack, he demands As the nicotine stains disfigure her hands Some day soon I'll try she says, as her son frowns with a sigh. ----------------------------------------------------------------- Note: In March I will have 3 years abstinent from smoking !! This poem was written in the 1970's.

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Date: 8/1/2012 9:47:00 PM
Sadly gorgeous. And weirdly inspiring. This is one I'll think of for long time to come. Probably everytime I light up an sit down to write. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 7/16/2010 8:37:00 AM
Yep! No one quits until they, themselves, are ready. Congrats on the selection. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/14/2010 12:32:00 PM
Such a honest portrayal Sue....you have accomplished something so many struggle and never can do! Hooray for you! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 7/14/2010 11:17:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on Poetry Soup home page this week, you are such a great talent. Please keep your poetry pen dancing to the lyrics of your heart. Be great and enjoy the honor. Have a lovely week. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/14/2010 11:04:00 AM
This poem feel so honest. Congratulations on on have your poem featured and for your victory over smoking. Enjoy both accomplishments. Keep on writing!!! Karen
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Date: 7/14/2010 5:20:00 AM
Excellent! Thanks for sharing -Jodie Q
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:11:00 PM
Congrats Sue on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a charmer to share with us all.. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:04:00 AM
Congrats, Sue, on the selection, but especially on having quit smoking. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/12/2010 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sue. Love, Carol
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