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Smoke and Fire

The sky looks like smoke and fire
Boiling from the Southwest
The silhouetted trees seem to be burning
Ablaze from fire in the sky

Roosters are unaffected with the show
Still cock-a-doddling the morning into day
They are joined by one lone crow look-out
Who is letting the others know danger is near

Whitey comes around preening and stretching
For the morning, loosing those joints
While the sky is continuouly changing
From glory to glory while the world moves on

Just like the cat, not even noticing
The spectacular are displayed in the sky
One day in the sky the King will
Come with his display and every eye will see

Now there is a cloud floating carrying
The blaze on it's backside
It is as if the smoke conceals
The blaze just before the blaze explodes

It is as if fierce combustion
Is going to spring forth
Lighting up the world
With a glowing burning sky

The air is chilling me to the bone
For it is damp and cold
Out on the porch at sunrise
Thank you Lord for the few minutes with you and nature
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kapoor Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 12:52 AM
Lovely and Nice. I too have liked its visual touch and last four lines. And thanks a lot for your sweet comments on my poem. Best wishes and love Ravindra
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December 1, 2009 at 3:21 PM
My favorite time of the day,,,good write and enjoyed....Thanks on "Good News, Bad News...glad that it made you laugh..Danny
Sheart Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 3:14 PM
Lovely visual Sara, love the last line in the awesome story. Keep writing!! Love Light Patty
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 11:25 AM
Wishing you a week blessed with love and inspiration Sara. I am thanking you for posting your excellent poetry which I have enjoyed reading today. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 4:55 PM
nicley penned, sunrise is close to God.
Yamin Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 4:24 PM
What an enchanting poem, Sara. You have painted the scenery with great articulation. Nice use of imagery. Let the flow of your pen not stop. It is inspiring to read your work. Thanks for your enlightened comments on my Haiku The House of Mirrors. -Mohammad
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November 30, 2009 at 12:47 PM
Amazing write today, Sara, especially "one day in the sky the King will come with his display and every eye will see" beautiful powerful lines.. a special scenery u have set for us to ponder today.. thankxxxx for sharing and for your many nice comments on my poetry always... blessings ... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Maughan Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Great words ! Love "blaze on its backside" Thanks for the comments! Hugs, Robin
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