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Smoke

I find my room doomed with demon's ill-famed gag
As long as I have my lucifer to light my ***
I find my room purged by smokes caused by
The belittled ignition on the cig
that brightens more when I inhale more deeply.
A puff or two reliefs me from strain
and I find my room blessed with divine guidance
As long as I have my lucifer to play with it
I find my imaginations weighted with more abstractionism
that often arrest me to the world of traits.
Three and more puffs I inhale
I see the cig weakens turning into ashes
that shows the future of mine ill-fated with curses
and smoke that blurs my room with a distinct smell
I wonder how life is going to live with so much hatreds.
Last puff at the butt - and I find the firmest of all
Desires provoking and urges me to be wistful
I find my room doomed with demons ill-famed gag
But my lucifer can't light up as am not having my ***.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 6:52 PM
Nice pen picture of the smoke you have created
Dinzes Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 1:11 PM
Dark, dark, dark. You tempt me with your lovely description of smoke. Please.... Quit already you prat! (I am only 15 days without one ;)
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