Get Your Premium Membership

Smoke

I find my room doomed with demon's ill-famed gag As long as I have my lucifer to light my *** I find my room purged by smokes caused by The belittled ignition on the cig that brightens more when I inhale more deeply. A puff or two reliefs me from strain and I find my room blessed with divine guidance As long as I have my lucifer to play with it I find my imaginations weighted with more abstractionism that often arrest me to the world of traits. Three and more puffs I inhale I see the cig weakens turning into ashes that shows the future of mine ill-fated with curses and smoke that blurs my room with a distinct smell I wonder how life is going to live with so much hatreds. Last puff at the butt - and I find the firmest of all Desires provoking and urges me to be wistful I find my room doomed with demons ill-famed gag But my lucifer can't light up as am not having my ***.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment
Date: 7/23/2010 6:52:00 PM
Nice pen picture of the smoke you have created
Login to Reply
Date: 7/23/2010 1:11:00 PM
Dark, dark, dark. You tempt me with your lovely description of smoke. Please.... Quit already you prat! (I am only 15 days without one ;)
Login to Reply