Smitten

Smitten


He was smitten with love for her;
by that arrow deep and sure.
A gooey warmth between them;
filling the heart all within.

But, loves shaft, festered, stinking foul;
to gangrenous, aching howl.
Through steamy glass his love moaned;
as he stood outside alone.

Those barbs cannot be reversed;
holding fast in a soul feeling cursed.
 Longing for the lost one gone, 
to the breast of a different one.

Love hates separating pain;
so forgives again and again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Oloye Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 4:09 PM
Beautiful work here
Bunton Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Thank you!
Teagan Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 10:28 PM
I can relate to this. This is actually a really good modern sonnet!
Bunton Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Thank you!
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