Smitten

Under the vast eternal sun, my heart was knit

     in rapt kinship, time melted in his presence 

               our days divine, indelible design

               were carved for us and us alone.








From poem, “How Long Is Forever”
Written on 1/20/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Faulkner Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 6:57 PM
'my heart was knit/in rapt kinship' - how stirring, this has such a lovely flow, hoping for a win for you!
Leiser Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 7:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle! I appreciate you stopping by to comment..glad you liked this! :)
Babcock Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 4:17 PM
A nice romantic write on being smitten by love. A gem for sure. love phyl
Leiser Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 6:59 PM
Thank you, Phyllis! I’m glad you liked my poem! :)
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