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Smitten

Under the vast eternal sun, my heart was knit in rapt kinship, time melted in his presence our days divine, indelible design were carved for us and us alone. From poem, “How Long Is Forever” Written on 1/20/2020

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Date: 6/15/2021 6:57:00 PM
'my heart was knit/in rapt kinship' - how stirring, this has such a lovely flow, hoping for a win for you!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/15/2021 7:00:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle! I appreciate you stopping by to comment..glad you liked this! :)
Date: 5/30/2021 4:17:00 PM
A nice romantic write on being smitten by love. A gem for sure. love phyl
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/15/2021 6:59:00 PM
Thank you, Phyllis! I’m glad you liked my poem! :)

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