Solomon Ochwo-Oburu Poet Imagism

Smiling Smiles

She gave me soup-less soup
In it I found her loaded smile
She smiled to me magnets
In her smiles rested all smiles
And greetings she did to me
In it I found her glowing smiles 
I tried to run away from her
In the bush I found her smiles
I smiled bitterly in lonely smile
In my tears I found her smiles
Like a ram I bleated regrets
But in the bleat her smiles rolled
And entered my smile reserves
Her smiles entangled mine
Then I thought; no wonder
Conqueror of hearts she is
But can she conquer universe too?

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Andrea Dietrich May 12, 2020 at 5:21 PM She sounds like one of the smiliest soupers ever! I'm taking this is meant for a fellow poet, right? It's so cute Solomon Ochwo-Oburu May 14, 2020 at 1:24 AM You are right Andrea You are one of the lucky ones. Thanks

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 26, 2020 at 3:02 PM She (your poem about her) made me smile! Greetings dear poet! Lovely to read you today, stay safe. xomo Solomon Ochwo-Oburu April 26, 2020 at 11:50 PM Thanks so much Maureen for the compliments. Good we are connected again. Stay safe please