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6/19/2025 for What Makes Me Smile 2 Poetry Contest sponsored by Karen Jones

Smiling Game

Howdy friend, I'm new in town.
I think I'll jot a few things down,
which, I hope, might take a frown
and turn it upside down. 
OK, now let's play a game,
to see how much we are the same. 
These are things that make me smile:
a new bride walks down the aisle
the radio plays my favorite song
a child has a place to belong
fish in a clear mountain stream
being part of a team 
I'm weird, I like insects and bugs
but I also like kisses and hugs
a funny, animated cartoon
a cute face on a red balloon
a caring nod, a holding hand
the twanging of a rubber band
a sunny day on the beach
biting a juicy, dripping peach
riding the crest of a wave
climbing into a secret cave
I like to scratch my dog's fur
and the voice of Karen Carpenter
In the morning it is fun
to see a flower meet the sun
a kid on a hot day with a hose
a fly when it lands on his nose
I like to watch a top when it spins 
and when the underdog wins
the smell of fresh baked bread
a good story to read in bed
to see the shining happy glow
of a child's face in a talent show
I like munching raisin scones
and wild animals that no one owns
please note, I am also smitten
by a week-old big eared kitten
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Jones Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 1:54 PM
Sent u soupmail today :0)
Crandall Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 7:09 PM
Got it!
Woods Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 6:38 AM
Brilliant, big- hearted, Sunshine on a page! Fave! Xo
Crandall Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 7:10 AM
Aw - what a great review!
Jones Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 11:48 PM
This was a fun read! David thanks for your entry and congratulations on your win! Your support in my contest means a lot to me! Please allow me time to get organized and I will format the book and get your final permission much later ok?
Crandall Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 7:11 AM
Sounds great - and thanks for getting me to think about reasons to smile!
Crandall Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 7:10 AM
Sounds great - and thanks for getting me to think about reasons to smile!
Volumes Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 9:25 AM
By the time I got to the peach I had a broad grin uncontrollably pasted on my face David. Congrats on a well deserved win. ( I am still smiling).
Crandall Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Oh, that's so great to hear, Speaks Volumes!
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 7:48 PM
Pretty awesome rhyming here, David, esp. 'a dog's fur' and 'Karen Carpenter.' Whoa! ... As for me, I like the twanging of a musical band --- when it's not made out of rubber. LOL. ~ Ex-washboard player
Crandall Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 5:30 PM
I admit I got a kick out of Karen Carpenter / dog's fur..."rubber band" - that was pretty weak - lol!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 3:02 PM
so much of what you've described makes me smile...loved the whimsy at the end. Best wishes with the contest
Crandall Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 6:19 PM
Hi Yellow Rose - thanks Yellow Rose! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 12:24 PM
That would make anyone smile! Thanks, David!
Crandall Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 6:20 PM
I'm glad to hear that - thanks, Kim :-)
Crandall Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 6:19 PM
I'm glad to hear that - thanks, Kim :-)
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 11:25 AM
- Many encouraging things you have on your canvas, David :) - A lovely poem :) - (I'm smiling today too... "All What You Need" :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Crandall Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 6:18 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise! I like how you call it my canvas! :-)
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