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6/19/2025 for What Makes Me Smile 2 Poetry Contest sponsored by Karen Jones

Howdy friend, I'm new in town. I think I'll jot a few things down, which, I hope, might take a frown and turn it upside down. OK, now let's play a game, to see how much we are the same. These are things that make me smile: a new bride walks down the aisle the radio plays my favorite song a child has a place to belong fish in a clear mountain stream being part of a team I'm weird, I like insects and bugs but I also like kisses and hugs a funny, animated cartoon a cute face on a red balloon a caring nod, a holding hand the twanging of a rubber band a sunny day on the beach biting a juicy, dripping peach riding the crest of a wave climbing into a secret cave I like to scratch my dog's fur and the voice of Karen Carpenter In the morning it is fun to see a flower meet the sun a kid on a hot day with a hose a fly when it lands on his nose I like to watch a top when it spins and when the underdog wins the smell of fresh baked bread a good story to read in bed to see the shining happy glow of a child's face in a talent show I like munching raisin scones and wild animals that no one owns please note, I am also smitten by a week-old big eared kitten

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Date: 6/19/2025 7:48:00 PM
Pretty awesome rhyming here, David, esp. 'a dog's fur' and 'Karen Carpenter.' Whoa! ... As for me, I like the twanging of a musical band --- when it's not made out of rubber. LOL. ~ Ex-washboard player
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Date: 6/19/2025 3:02:00 PM
so much of what you've described makes me smile...loved the whimsy at the end. Best wishes with the contest
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David Crandall
Date: 6/19/2025 6:19:00 PM
Hi Yellow Rose - thanks Yellow Rose! :-)
Date: 6/19/2025 12:24:00 PM
That would make anyone smile! Thanks, David!
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David Crandall
Date: 6/19/2025 6:20:00 PM
I'm glad to hear that - thanks, Kim :-)
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David Crandall
Date: 6/19/2025 6:19:00 PM
I'm glad to hear that - thanks, Kim :-)
Date: 6/19/2025 11:25:00 AM
- Many encouraging things you have on your canvas, David :) - A lovely poem :) - (I'm smiling today too... "All What You Need" :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 6/19/2025 6:18:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise! I like how you call it my canvas! :-)

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