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Smiling Blooms

buds smiling in bubbly mirth lovely damsels of the earth hidden in emerald veil wafting sweet aroma in the dale March.22. 2022 Lind 30 Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor-Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Bill Baker

Date: 3/28/2022 4:59:00 PM

lovely Lind30, Valsa. Should do well in the contest. I enjoyed it completely. Hugs, Bill

Jcb Brul

Date: 3/25/2022 1:28:00 PM

What an outstanding tanka! You are a master of description my friend!

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/24/2022 4:12:00 PM

Valsa, spring has unquestionably come, and as the climate earth heats up, those blooms will be a wonderful sight. Best wishes for the contest dear friend.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/24/2022 2:45:00 PM

Love those damsels of spring, Valsa, the bright colors from the green ground, and the aroma so enticing, this is quite pretty!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/22/2022 1:04:00 PM

Lovely spring time piece to brighten up our days, thanks for sharing, blessings always,Gordon

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/22/2022 9:32:00 AM

Spring is definitely here Valsa, starting to warm up here, those blooms will be lovely to see. Tom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/22/2022 5:12:00 AM

Lovely poem, Valsa--Enjoyed your description of smiling bloom.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/22/2022 2:34:00 AM

It is so often compared, flowers and girls or women, whether in romantic writes beautiful flower writes or sometimes sad writes . Really awesome. Thank you Valsa for going back to some of my older writes , it meant s lot to me. Love and hugs Jennifer

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/22/2022 2:01:00 AM

That's a glen I would wish to be. Blessings