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Smiling Blooms

buds smiling in bubbly mirth
lovely damsels of the earth
hidden in emerald veil
wafting sweet aroma in the dale

March.22. 2022
Lind 30 Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsor-Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Bill Baker

March 28, 2022 at 4:59 PM

lovely Lind30, Valsa. Should do well in the contest. I enjoyed it completely. Hugs, Bill

JC Brul

March 25, 2022 at 1:28 PM

What an outstanding tanka! You are a master of description my friend!

Sotto Poet

March 24, 2022 at 4:12 PM

Valsa, spring has unquestionably come, and as the climate earth heats up, those blooms will be a wonderful sight. Best wishes for the contest dear friend.

Michelle Faulkner

March 24, 2022 at 2:45 PM

Love those damsels of spring, Valsa, the bright colors from the green ground, and the aroma so enticing, this is quite pretty!

Gordon Mcconnell

March 22, 2022 at 1:04 PM

Lovely spring time piece to brighten up our days, thanks for sharing, blessings always,Gordon

Tom Cunningham

March 22, 2022 at 9:32 AM

Spring is definitely here Valsa, starting to warm up here, those blooms will be lovely to see. Tom

Vijay Pandit

March 22, 2022 at 5:12 AM

Lovely poem, Valsa--Enjoyed your description of smiling bloom.

Jennifer Proxenos

March 22, 2022 at 2:34 AM

It is so often compared, flowers and girls or women, whether in romantic writes beautiful flower writes or sometimes sad writes . Really awesome. Thank you Valsa for going back to some of my older writes , it meant s lot to me. Love and hugs Jennifer