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Smiled Wild-CM

A red rose smiled,
and bled in wild.




Fourtle Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/16/2025 5:56:00 AM

This one touches the heart. Happy mixed with sadness. I see much in this itty bitty write! Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 9/16/2025 4:57:00 AM

Simply awesome, dear Vandana ! All the Best!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/15/2025 11:24:00 PM

Concise but full of meaning. Best for a win.

Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 9/16/2025 1:03:00 AM

Thank you. The challenge is to write short and meaningful poem.

Krishika Upadhyay

Date: 9/15/2025 7:47:00 PM

Short yet striking, just a few words, but the contrast of beauty and pain is powerful. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 9/15/2025 7:49:00 PM

Thank you Glad you liked it.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/15/2025 5:12:00 PM

well done...best wishes with this entry in the contest :-)

Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 9/15/2025 6:39:00 PM

Thank you

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/15/2025 11:42:00 AM

Just a few words to describe a creative bloom. Best wishes with the contest.

Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 9/15/2025 6:39:00 PM

Thank you

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/15/2025 10:09:00 AM

Few words for a creative rose write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away.........

Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 9/15/2025 10:42:00 AM

Yes, it is for a contest. Thank you .

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2025 9:23:00 AM

Hmm, I have seen another person rhyming differently. Methinks you are the one who did it correctly! Great job.

Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 9/15/2025 10:42:00 AM

:) Really!! thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2025 7:30:00 AM

- Beautiful :) - hugs

Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 9/15/2025 7:42:00 AM

Smiled Wild-CM

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