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I remember that first smile The way my cheek bones raised Even when you are not near I find myself with that stare The smile my lips can not deny If I promised to save all my smiles for you You could never be blue As you could then know they were true Like a stolen kiss they seal our delight As I write this for you My eyes smile of the thought of you My mouth weakens to the smile Every nerve ending in my body reacts Just one more smile just for you...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/4/2010 5:04:00 PM
I love how the eyes smile before the mouth and then pull the whole body into the smile - that's so true, but this is the first time I've ever read it in poetry! Saving smiles is also a creative concept. Enojyed this one :) -Grace
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Date: 7/3/2010 7:01:00 PM
A nice creative write on love and passionate yearning, Sarah
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Date: 7/3/2010 5:59:00 PM
this write has a fun loving glow to it:),, sweet write ,,, P.D.
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Date: 7/3/2010 3:42:00 PM
Lovely title Sarah, a sweet poem from a sweet poetess >> James
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:46:00 PM
lovely one Sarah
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