Smile

"smile" as light reflects smile with gratitude watch the sparkle grow let beauty show when darkness shadows smile through burdens feel such stress lift see life shift unfold blessings outwardly release weight inwardly smile through highs and lows touch all rainbows SkyWatcher 06-29-23

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/29/2023 1:01:00 PM

Dear Lisa, your verse touches me deeply, yes a smile is the light switch that turns on positive vibes both internally and externally. A smile holds the radiance of the sun, the hope of the stars and the serenity of the moon. Indeed, "smile through highs and lows / touch all rainbows" - wow! so inspiring and so true! Your verse has the power to lift hearts to beyond the clouds. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/30/2023 2:54:00 AM

Oh My Goodness. Good Morning Susan. It is my turn to say that your review and commentary touch me deeply. Truly and Honestly. I know my writing is simplistic and not vintage like others but it works for me so I leave all the vintage executions up to others. I thank you for your intake and for enhancing the entry itself. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings (smile)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/29/2023 9:18:00 AM

Sweet Lisa, I wish I can smile. But I'm taciturn and morose. Loved your poem though Very positive.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/29/2023 10:24:00 AM

I know Victor and because of that and your health it leaves me with tears and sadness which leaves me in a state of mellow. Thank you for continuing to see my work. There are no words for that. Truly. I am all over the place today so I will turn to your page tomorrow. Love and Blessings now and always. Peace..... (smile)