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Smelling Delight In the Morning

Grateful to God* for deliverance from anosmia I praise Him for the pleasant breath of life midst jubilant smelling optimization oozing with wondrous delights... On a restful day of redolent vibrancy, my nose is greeted by minty scent of my special child's shampoo with citrus body wash along bubble gum-cologne and refreshing baby powder after his bathing spree... Oh, I enjoy the aroma of steamed breakfast rice sizzling barbecue, creamy chicken-vegetable soup with mango yoghurt while allowing hot chocolate to blend with the smell of toasted bun midst peanut butter. Concluding my morning festive flavorsome meal my olfactory sense is welcomed by serene balmy room verily therapeutic as I immerse for writing pursuits gripped with the lavender fragrance of my own perfume.
*In every thing give thanks: for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus concerning you. September 12, 2023 2nd place, "Five Senses (Smelling Emphasis)" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Sotto Poet; judged on 9/13/2023

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Date: 9/15/2023 3:45:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 9/13/2023 11:53:00 AM
Beata, I am truly delighted to offer my sincere congratulations for your well-earned win in my contest. Your poetry is truly awe-inspiring, as you express your ideas with remarkable accuracy and grace.
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