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May- 27- 2025
Choose a Line 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Joseph May

 

As I walked into a family restaurant, My nose got tickled all of a sudden By a familiar aroma that entered my nostrils. It transported me back to the years long past, When I was a child at my far away home In my mother’s kitchen on a Christmas day. The smell of chicken stew and *‘appam’ And the intoxicating taste of steaming tea, Raided my memory with deep nostalgia. The spicy aroma of her kitchen still haunts me And how I miss her culinary talents! Amid this smell, pops up her smiling face. When I catch such scent, how my mind runs to my mother. Though she is not with me now, what sweetness is there For those memories that tie me to my mother And wish those smells should never fade away. It gives me the feel that she is with me, so close. When the smell of Jasmine wafts through the air, It always brings memories of our first night, When I timorously entered my husband’s room, Carrying the delicate texture of a dream, Lending romance to the still night. His bewitching presence and endearing words, Filtered down into my mind, making me feel Both of us being lodged and lost in a fairy land. When we mingled and melded into one, In a spark emitting sensuous indulgence, Never thought we would be together all these years Drinking from the same cup, the bubbling wine And the bitter, acidic potion of pain, alike. Holding on to those honey dripping memories, I re-live those heavenly moments. Is it not strange that "memories buried in the wavering wash of time" are stirred, that lie ash laden when olfactory senses activate, the neurons of our brain from time to time! * Appam- a Kerala( Indian) delicacy.

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Date: 6/4/2025 11:02:00 AM
you did wonderfully well with the line, Valsa. Nice memories for sure. I bet this scores high.
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Date: 6/2/2025 2:57:00 AM
Indeed, scents, sounds, visions are all cumulative parts of us -- as much of where we are at the moment, are our memories. A life of experience in every single cell of being. Apple pie is my favorite. Well said, Valsa.
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Date: 5/30/2025 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Smell Induced Memories" write. Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Date: 5/30/2025 8:45:00 AM
Very nicely penned Valsa, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/3/2025 6:22:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Joseph. Sorry, couldn't respond earlier as I was on a week's tour and am just back.
Date: 5/30/2025 12:17:00 AM
Congratulations, dear friend, on your win in this contest with a thoughtful take on the prompt to pen a lovely poem on reminiscences from youthful days. Wishing you a pleasant day.
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Date: 5/29/2025 7:53:00 PM
I am deeply moved by the exquisite beauty of your poetry, dear Valsa. Aromas have an incredible power to bring back emotions that hit close to home. Congratulations on your contest win.
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Date: 5/29/2025 7:51:00 PM
A wonderful write, from top to bottom. CayCay
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Date: 5/28/2025 10:10:00 PM
Your poetry is so incredibly beautiful Valsa, this is so touching. It is amazing how we can be transported back through memory with the scents wafting right through to our very heart and soul. This was precious, a fave.
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Date: 5/27/2025 10:41:00 AM
Nice touching, loving and romantic poem. Who would forget Mom's cooking. I still brag it after sixty years.
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Date: 5/27/2025 8:45:00 AM
Good thing I am writing this at 5.30 in the evening. You stir my appetite for good things, though I am still on a diet. Lovely poem. Blessings.
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Date: 5/27/2025 7:50:00 AM
kind of poetry, i can't resist today, this is touching delicate and emotional, always enjoy your philosophy dear poet
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