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Smeagol's Beatles, Norwegian Wood

I once had a ring, or should I say, it once had me... 
it made me vanish, isn't it good, my precious ring? 

it asked me to wear it and make way to its masters cave, 
So it drove me mad and its my precious for me to crave, 

I lived in a cave, biding my time, eating like swine,
We dwelled until time and then bagginses came, took what was mine.

They took me to Mordor and burned me, So I started to talk. 
I told them I didn't and spoke off to Orcs, shire is the path 

And when I awoke, I was alone, Frodo had flown 
So he left from shire, isn't it good, my precious will be mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A. Sharma Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 12:13 AM
Wonderful write on jealousy ravi n a great win! Big congrats!
A  Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 11:24 PM
Ravi, congratulations on your win. Thank you for the support. Love SKAT
Andresen Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 5:09 AM
- I hope you do not think: "I lived in a cave, biding my time, like eating swine" in Norway .... lol - Pleased to read your work Ravi. - Happy New Year!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kiran Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 5:15 AM
No I haven't thought about that... Thanks, Happy new year to you too
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