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Small Towns Seldom Go Berserk

The subtle scent of lilacs rides the breeze. Cascading flowers brighten in sun’s sheen. On crisp cool nights there rarely is a freeze. And autumn leaves seem always to be green. As moonlight changes daylight’s atmosphere, Big cats and fox roam through the forest fair. The starlight sparkles bright when nights are clear, While families inside say night-time prayers – When daybreak falls, the children go to school. The bus ride quickly drives through rural routes. Adults, then, go to work; some people rule! The pecking orders known since kids were sprouts. If freedoms remain free, it’s no guesswork. Small towns down south will never go berserk. 12/30/2016 Written for Silent One’s Contest: A Sonnet About Where You Live. This poem is about Live Oak, Florida, U.S.A.

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Date: 1/8/2017 3:32:00 AM
congratulations on your huge win. B'ful write. Deserves A7.
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/15/2017 5:11:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by to congratulate me and leaving your kind words. Big Smiles.
Date: 1/7/2017 6:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Dane.
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/15/2017 5:12:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by to congratulate me. Big Smiles. Dane Ann
Date: 1/7/2017 4:59:00 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN, ANOTHER SUPERB SONNET WRITTEN ON THE SOUTH! The South I was born and bred to love too.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/7/2017 8:21:00 PM
We are rural, back a bit into the hills. So great to be back within eyesight of Nature's beauty and these flowing hills! Moved from small town living back into rural setting , almost like to my childhood living.. Deer cross road in front of my house and furry critters wander about most of the year here.
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/7/2017 6:20:00 PM
Thanks for your congratulations. Down South...city or rural? Just wondering...how far south. Big Smiles.
Date: 1/7/2017 4:42:00 PM
Beautiful glimpse of where you live congratulations, Dana, on your win. Hugs Eve
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/7/2017 6:23:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me. It is much appreciated. Hugs and Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 1/7/2017 2:07:00 PM
Congratulations Dane-Ann!! Well done! I've yet to make it to Florida,but that's on my bucket list!!;) Big Hugggs. Deb
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/7/2017 6:31:00 PM
Lol!! DaneAnn!! I'm more a Sanibel Island kinda person... not into the Disney stuff... I like nature's attractions;)
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/7/2017 6:25:00 PM
Florida has many man made attractions as well as some of the most beautiful natural scenes you will see anywhere else in the world. I hope you make it some day ... and not just to Disney World! Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 1/7/2017 11:39:00 AM
Congrats on the win, and nice to see a fellow southern enthusiast!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/7/2017 6:26:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me. Yes, I love my little place here, down South. It is nice to see you, who also loves the south. Big Smiles.
Date: 1/7/2017 11:26:00 AM
Dane Ann, well deserved 1st place :) Congratulations!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/7/2017 6:27:00 PM
Thank you for your very appreciated congratulations. Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 1/7/2017 10:32:00 AM
Sweet, Dane! Congrats!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/7/2017 6:28:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by. Your congratulations is appreciated Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 1/7/2017 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations! :)
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/7/2017 6:28:00 PM
Thanks. :)
Date: 12/31/2016 1:14:00 PM
Hi Dane Ann, lovely poem, for a lovely town!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/31/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thank you for your kind remarks, Paulette. Happy New Year! Big Smiles, Dane Ann

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