Smack-Dab

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This is a tribute lyric to Cole Porter in the form of "You're The Top" his 1934 "list" style poetic lyric and often performed song which was part of the hit musical Anything Goes.

 

Ya know baby you're usually right
Center cut, intherace, that's your place
On target, red carpet, gotomarket
Hittin' the bull's eye, 'n baby, I'm your guy
Smack-Dab babe
Like the Nile, you flow the right way
Like Carlyle, know what ta say
With you, I'm okay
If ever I'm off and stray
Grab meaway, gimme a jab
Baby, that's Smack-Dab
You're like Ophelia, Antonin Scailia, multimedia, memorabilia
Honey, you're KarmannGhia! Oh, callmea cab
Baby, you're Smack-Dab
You're Lash La Rue, Peggy Sue, Scooby Doo, Mister Magoo
Honey, You're Super Glue! Wow! Back to the lab
Baby, you're Smack-Dab
You're so sure
We're at that stage, we needa sage
Honey, you're the rage!
Baby, you're Smack-Dab
You're like Al Gore, Dorothy Lamour, Dinah Shore, Za Za Gabor
Honey, you're no bore! Ain't never drab
Baby, you're Smack-Dab
You're so fab
Fit as a fiddle, Nelson Riddle, heat upthe griddle
Honey, you're in the middle!
Baby, you're Smack-Dab
You're Buster Crabbe, Colin McNab, take a stab, my bar tab
Honey, you're my rehab! Ah, the gift a gab
Baby, you're Smack-Dab
While it's true only you I adore
I really oughtta tell you more
Baby, Imma big time loser, a simple fleck
Honey, you're a sure winner, a stacked deck
You're my Madonna, only one I wanna
Someday you'll get rings 'n things
For now your praises, it's me who sings
I'd rope a Picasso with my trusty lasso
Ya know I'd buyeth, if I saw a good Wyeth
Honey, you're the latest 'n the greatest
Baby, that's Smack-Dab

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/5/2020 8:07:00 AM
This is well articulated write Greg! So many references in a perfect blend of flow and rhythm. This is creatively done. Congratulations on your win :) Keep writing and inspiring
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Greg Gaul
Date: 7/5/2020 10:06:00 AM
Aditi, so glad you enjoyed the fun!
Date: 7/1/2020 12:27:00 AM
Lookout, Broadway, here comes Greg Gaul! Following in the fabulous footsteps of the master, Cole Porter! Really Greg, this is top shelf lyric writing. Loved "I'd rope a Picasso with my trusty lasso / Ya know I'd buyeth, if I saw a good Wyeth". Great concept, clever rhymes, well executed. Congratulations, and keep up the great work ~ John
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Greg Gaul
Date: 7/1/2020 6:05:00 AM
John, I respect your notice and especially this cogent and kind critique. So glad you enjoyed this bit of word play fun. Fact is, that's what millions loved about Cole's original. Most appreciated your visit John.
Date: 6/30/2020 12:19:00 PM
Hey Greg who knew you were a rapper? This is a fun write enjoyed the rhymes they're hilarious, congrats on a nice placement!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/30/2020 4:03:00 PM
John, thanks for your placement and your hosting the contest. Cole Porter would thank you too ( my poem was a tribute piece to Cole Porter's 1934 Broadway hit Anything Goes).
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/30/2020 3:57:00 PM
John, thanks for your placement and your hosting the contest. Cole Porter would thank you too ( my poem was a tribute piece to zcole Porter's 1934 Broadway hit Anything Goes).
Date: 6/8/2019 7:35:00 PM
Oh, this is such a fun and fantastic poem, Greg. The rhythm and rhymes are amazing! Your artistry shines in this awesome lyric. congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/9/2019 5:15:00 PM
So encouraging to see that you enjoyed this zany piece. It was fun to be part of the contest and I congratulate you as well for your passionate entry. Thanks ever so.
Date: 6/6/2019 11:41:00 AM
I had a smile all the way through this fun lyrical poem Greg. Love seeing it as a First Place winner. Congratulations! : )
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/6/2019 3:09:00 PM
Noticed your poem right next mine Connie. Just too much fun. Congrats to you too. Seeing your name and the others makes me feel good. Thanks again for the note, ghadzooks you're quick!
Date: 6/14/2018 11:31:00 AM
Awesome!! I bet y'all have a lot of fun. :) Congratulations on your win!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/14/2018 3:54:00 PM
So "Dancin' Sue" I've got one for you. But sincere thanks are due for your kind review. It's called Dance Secrets if you get time. Hope you enjoy the rhyme. You're somethin'. Ain't it fun?
Date: 6/9/2018 11:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this original dance, Greg.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/10/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thanks truly Line. This is a bit of whimsy no doubt but fun to do.
Date: 4/28/2018 8:18:00 AM
Beautiful, unique, lovely, rare, effable and creative. Lovely work.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 4/28/2018 3:17:00 PM
Really appreciate your approval and kind commentary. It's an offbeat try (no pun) for me, so I'm hanging out there a bit. Your commentary supports. Thanks.
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