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Slytraps Revenge!

There were some rude people from Slytrap who only new how to write mean crap, so on they all squiggled, and manically giggled, while Shakespearian fops took cat naps.

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/20/2010 3:33:00 PM

you are right about getting the meter right on these limericks it is difficult.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/20/2010 3:32:00 PM

funny write!! congrats on your win!!

James Fraser

Date: 7/20/2010 12:51:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Deborah with this fine Limerick >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2010 11:19:00 AM

Congratulations Deb on your well deserved win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Anti-Slam Limericks". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2010 7:32:00 PM

How original and unique TEACH.. if for the contest ..good luck... my entry is ZIP IT... and thankxxx so very much for my 2nd place win in your numbers contest...it was a joy to create this entry for u as fives are so big in my life and always have been...my engagement was even on the 15th of July..WoW... and if not for traveling time our wedding would be Aug. 15th rather than the 22nd.. go figure> anyway.. the 22nd of every month is always fantastic for me.. so am looking forward to that day..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2010 6:51:00 PM

ps. if the stupid narrative part had gone thru , you could know that the list of things represented pop culture, and those things shaped not only my year and influenced the baby boomers but also shaped me as well. Deb, I hope you start paying attention to what I am saying. Good grief, what am I to with you!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2010 6:48:00 PM

geeez, Deb. I even explained it out in front of the poem. GRRRRR on you. hahaha

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/17/2010 7:02:00 PM

Soup Mail too, Cher! - Tim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/17/2010 3:09:00 PM

LOL not too much rhymes with crap??? :p

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2010 3:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Glad you thought of it...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2010 2:55:00 PM

Congratulations, Deb. Funny name slytrap! Luv, Andrea

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/17/2010 2:33:00 PM

Yep...Knew this was a winner first time I read it, Cher...guess this old fop gonna' take a cat nap too..wake me when it's over - Tim

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/17/2010 1:51:00 PM

Congratulations Deb., on your HM in Carolyn's contest with this witty poem. Very nice! Lovingly, Dane Ann PS I tried to call you...busy, busy, busy! XOXOX

John Freeman

Date: 7/17/2010 1:27:00 PM

Smart one Deb. Congratulation in success in contest. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/17/2010 1:09:00 PM

Well done, Deborah. The last line is a kicker. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/17/2010 12:27:00 PM

good write, good luck in the contest

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/17/2010 11:52:00 AM

LOL Deb., Good luck in the contest! Now, enter a slam to the slammers in the slam contest...the poetry soup support way! They can dish it out and I've heard they can take it, too. I can't though. Have a super day. This is good. Love, Dane