Slytraps Revenge!

There were some rude people from Slytrap
who only new how to write mean crap,
so on they all squiggled,
and manically giggled,
while Shakespearian fops took cat naps.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 3:33 PM
you are right about getting the meter right on these limericks it is difficult.
Culverhouse Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 3:32 PM
funny write!! congrats on your win!!
Fraser Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 12:51 PM
Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Deborah with this fine Limerick >> James
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations Deb on your well deserved win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Anti-Slam Limericks". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 7:32 PM
How original and unique TEACH.. if for the contest ..good luck... my entry is ZIP IT... and thankxxx so very much for my 2nd place win in your numbers contest...it was a joy to create this entry for u as fives are so big in my life and always have been...my engagement was even on the 15th of July..WoW... and if not for traveling time our wedding would be Aug. 15th rather than the 22nd.. go figure> anyway.. the 22nd of every month is always fantastic for me.. so am looking forward to that day..
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 6:51 PM
ps. if the stupid narrative part had gone thru , you could know that the list of things represented pop culture, and those things shaped not only my year and influenced the baby boomers but also shaped me as well. Deb, I hope you start paying attention to what I am saying. Good grief, what am I to with you!!!
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 6:48 PM
geeez, Deb. I even explained it out in front of the poem. GRRRRR on you. hahaha
Ryerson Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 7:02 PM
Soup Mail too, Cher! - Tim
Guzzi Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 3:09 PM
LOL not too much rhymes with crap??? :p
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 3:04 PM
Congratulations on your win..Glad you thought of it...Sara
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 2:55 PM
Congratulations, Deb. Funny name slytrap! Luv, Andrea
Ryerson Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 2:33 PM
Yep...Knew this was a winner first time I read it, Cher...guess this old fop gonna' take a cat nap too..wake me when it's over - Tim
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 1:51 PM
Congratulations Deb., on your HM in Carolyn's contest with this witty poem. Very nice! Lovingly, Dane Ann PS I tried to call you...busy, busy, busy! XOXOX
Freeman Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Smart one Deb. Congratulation in success in contest. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 1:09 PM
Well done, Deborah. The last line is a kicker. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 12:27 PM
good write, good luck in the contest
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 11:52 AM
LOL Deb., Good luck in the contest! Now, enter a slam to the slammers in the slam contest...the poetry soup support way! They can dish it out and I've heard they can take it, too. I can't though. Have a super day. This is good. Love, Dane
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