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Robert J. Lindley, 3-16-2019
Sonnet, ( As the dark hours slowly march )
 
Syllables Per Line: 0 8 8 8 8 0 8 8 8 8 0 8 8 8 8 0 8 8
Total # Syllables: 112
Total # Words: 90
Slow, The Flow Of Time's Waning Hands On nights that I can not slow walk through dreams that may, my sad soul heal With such interruption heart balks at the sorrows I come to feel. Waning midnight hours race on past night shadows then appear to prowl bed writhing, I pray it not last useless, as nightmare monsters howl! Slow, the flow of time's waning hands their razor claws slashing in deep Over and over, one last stand as Hope promises blessed sleep. In my sleep I try to fast talk. From dead body outlined in chalk. Robert J. Lindley, 3-16-2019 Sonnet, ( As the dark hours slowly march )

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Date: 4/19/2019 4:14:00 PM
Wow, now I see what you meant about sharing Poe's love of dark. Amazing.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/19/2019 5:13:00 PM
Thanks my friend. Poe shot arrows into a weeping soul* His aim was not a shot into the dark* Late midnight blood was terror's greater toll* Its savagery blood-splashing and stark* Appreciate the reading and commenting..
Date: 4/2/2019 6:29:00 PM
Your poem conveys a profound sense of being incarcerated in a body destined to decay. Wonderful writing my friend. I will try to catch up with what I have missed while being too ill to enjoy poetry. Have a lovely Easter my friend.xxoo : )
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/3/2019 5:43:00 AM
Thank you my dear fried. Your words are inspiring to me. Sorry you have been so ill as of late , may God bless you and gift a speedy recovery.
Date: 3/24/2019 9:22:00 AM
Hi Robert, such can be the deep emotions that take us in our musings within the early hours. Another deep and dark write from your master pen. As I read, such strong visions flow through my mind. Your golden pen is singing my friend. Be it sadness or joy, anger or love, your pen does share true poetry. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 3/27/2019 4:59:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I truly appreciate your kind comment. A true poet can only write what heart and soul dictates, IMHO.
Date: 3/21/2019 10:21:00 AM
Sad, somewhat dark; a forlorn soul trapped in the physical plane. Well penned, my friend.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 3/27/2019 4:57:00 AM
Thank you my friend. As the very short lived creatures that we are , trapped is a good way to judge our existence here.
Date: 3/17/2019 1:02:00 AM
This is melancholy and rich, and captures those 3 a.m. musings, when the heart feels cold. Wonderful and sad! Thank You!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 3/27/2019 4:54:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 3/16/2019 2:12:00 PM
Dark and deep my friend...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 3/27/2019 4:54:00 AM
Thank you my friend.

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