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Slow Observation

The cold fabric of humanity The diseased pulse of a city Seen through microscope eyes that seduce the unknown. A faint whisper I thought I heard A fossil of the pale interior Words dissolve to a brush of wind And I can only observe Merely Sincerely While the candle burns to nothingness. The eternal cycle will plague it's numbered pawns till seeds of life have withdrawn in slow writhing of universal fibers Like a leer from a wandering eye Silent soundscape Helpless cry. Now free us from ourselves and from inside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/15/2009 3:04:00 PM
loved the words and beautiful way you put it. enjoyed reading this and enjoy your day.
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Date: 1/15/2009 1:11:00 PM
Yeah that was basically the point of it. I appreciate your feedback.
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Date: 1/15/2009 1:07:00 PM
This is a good way to say we are our own worse enemy, the posions we choose will make or break our road in life. Well written Freeverse, thanks for sharring.Judy Riley
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