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Slow Hands Can'T Rest

Slow hands can't rest stripped down anticipation still holding intoxication dripped from sweet lips Words whipped with lemon tips free float in wayward winds fingers grasped gentlly touched a zestful reprise entwined Moved with the morning dew falling deeper into you awaiting a pleasing glimpse a kiss carressed sips leveling every part of a misted me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/6/2017 5:43:00 PM
Cool imagery, Tim. The title is very telling!!
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Date: 9/6/2017 3:11:00 PM
"Moved with the morning dew falling deeper into you " - love those lines, Tim! Actually that whole last stanza is immensely beautiful. I love your descriptive work! Interesting title too. The zesty stanza is really fun. Loved it! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/5/2017 12:56:00 PM
WOW! :)
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Date: 9/5/2017 11:59:00 AM
Slow hands are the best!
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Date: 9/5/2017 8:40:00 AM
Ooh lah lah X 17!!!
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Date: 9/4/2017 9:54:00 PM
Nicely done , Tim, I'm putting my hands over my eyes so I won't peek :' ) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/4/2017 2:45:00 PM
Woohoo what a passionate poem tim and slow hands makes me think of... errrr Eric Clapton lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/4/2017 1:28:00 PM
WoW! Tim, this write is so well written and intoxicating. I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/4/2017 12:28:00 PM
Wow Tim. Words whipped with lemon tips. ..what a line :)
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Date: 9/4/2017 12:26:00 PM
- Never let go of the intoxication, Tim - Lovely - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/4/2017 12:13:00 PM
A romance of words depicting a lovely romantic scene--well done Tim!
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