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Written on July 19, 2024

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Inspired by Glenn Hughes song, “Why Don’t You Stay” You’re like a breath to my prayer You’re silence and joy everywhere You’re the star that glows in the night You’re the warmth in the sun’s light Don’t let the madness of yesterday Leave you feeling like going away I won’t let you feel lonely, all I can say Is I feel so lost when you refuse to stay Listen to my voice in your mind Believe me, honey, you’re one of a kind When I said that I love you, I meant for all time Living without you feels almost a crime! Listen to me, darling, listen and know Reflected inside are feelings who show Without you beside me, I feel so lost Listen, darling, so you’ll realize the cost Don’t leave, honey – stay beside me ‘til the end Let love be your guide and you’ll be my best friend Never leave me, darling – I’ll always love you so Take my hand, sweetheart, and we’ll dance real slow

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Date: 9/10/2024 7:17:00 AM
‘ Believe me, honey, you’re one of a kind’… beautiful poem. Congrats on your placement. Please consider doing my new Glenn Hughes contest.
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Date: 8/16/2024 8:49:00 PM
Gina, amazing poem, I love it and congratulations on your win, Constance
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Date: 7/19/2024 10:33:00 PM
Fav! So many great lines from a person begging for the other to stay in a relationship.
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Date: 7/19/2024 2:51:00 PM
Hello Regina mcIntosh, oh, so romantic. Wish i could meet some like that. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 7/19/2024 5:46:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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