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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required. 

Smoldering
         embers ignite;
                  and things

start to sizzle
         as the heat rises
                  between us
                        forging

two hearts and
         two souls
                  into one...

Passion's heat 
         fuels love’s slow burn
                  and like the famed phoenix
                        hope

rises from its ash...


(Yalto)


(06/03/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/3/2020 9:28:00 PM
Yes Emile... another stunning write, ooh la la it's a hot one, loved this!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/3/2020 9:44:00 PM
Thanks John, I always get a charge from your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/3/2020 6:51:00 PM
Wow, Emile, what a stunning Yalto! I love it!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/3/2020 9:43:00 PM
Thanks Edward, your contest inspired me to try your Yalto in its many forms my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/3/2020 9:37:00 AM
Lovely poem, dear friend. A joy to read. God bless you with many more. Love, Gina
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/3/2020 10:45:00 AM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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