Slow Burn

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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required.

Smoldering embers ignite; and things start to sizzle as the heat rises between us forging two hearts and two souls into one... Passion's heat fuels love’s slow burn and like the famed phoenix hope rises from its ash... (Yalto) (06/03/2020

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John Hamilton

Date: 6/3/2020 9:28:00 PM

Yes Emile... another stunning write, ooh la la it's a hot one, loved this!

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/3/2020 9:44:00 PM

Thanks John, I always get a charge from your comments my friend, Emile.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/3/2020 6:51:00 PM

Wow, Emile, what a stunning Yalto! I love it!

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/3/2020 9:43:00 PM

Thanks Edward, your contest inspired me to try your Yalto in its many forms my friend, Emile.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/3/2020 9:37:00 AM

Lovely poem, dear friend. A joy to read. God bless you with many more. Love, Gina

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/3/2020 10:45:00 AM

Thanks Regina, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.