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~A METAPHOR PERTAINING TO ADDICTION~

Hissing noises... A forked tongue... I hear the poison. Fangs dripping... A lethal infection... I'm always tripping. The road ahead is lonely... Will I survive... Her injection? Choices made... Before the sun rises... Boom, Boom. I love you... But, I'll kill you... That's the price of change.

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Date: 10/5/2018 8:45:00 AM
An excellent imagery with strong meaning
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 10/29/2018 5:26:00 PM
Thanks, Muhammad
Date: 9/28/2018 1:55:00 AM
Very powerful verse! Loved the song too!
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 9/28/2018 5:54:00 PM
Thanks, Arthur.

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